Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer natural and concise within 5 sentences.

예시: I don't write a lot in my daily life, but during exams, I have to write extensively, which makes me feel quite stressed and my hands sometimes hurt.

제안: Your answer should be more natural and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence and provide specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and redundancy.

예시: I enjoy writing essays on given topics because it allows me to organize my thoughts clearly. Usually, I write one or two pages, ensuring the essay has a proper structure with an introduction, body, and conclusion.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Respond directly with a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: I believe the content I write does not change much because it is based on universal facts. Since facts remain constant, the information I write usually stays the same.

제안: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Keep the answer concise and clear.

예시: I prefer handwriting because I have been practicing it since childhood. It feels more personal and helps me remember information better. Although typing is faster, writing by hand provides a more comfortable and effective experience.

× The exam where my hands get start pinning.

✓ The exam where my hands start pinning.

The phrase 'get start pinning' is incorrect because 'get' should not be followed by 'start' in this context. The correct form is 'start pinning' to indicate the beginning of the action.

× I really like to write an essay with a topic has given.

✓ I really like to write an essay with a given topic.

The phrase 'a topic has given' is incorrect. The correct form is 'a given topic' where 'given' acts as an adjective describing the topic.

× For Anna page or and two page at least.

✓ For one page or at least two pages.

The phrase 'Anna page or and two page' is unclear and incorrect. It should be 'one page or at least two pages' to correctly express quantity and plural form.

× I think what I write it does not change becaused.

✓ I think what I write does not change because.

The word 'becaused' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because'. Also, 'what I write it does not change' has an unnecessary pronoun 'it' which should be removed.

× The facts are return, and these facts are all over the world.

✓ The facts are true, and these facts are all over the world.

The word 'return' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'true' to indicate correctness of facts.

× Based on the facts we write, is the final step and.

✓ Based on the facts we write, it is the final step.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject. Adding 'it' clarifies the subject and completes the sentence.

× Brief.

✓ Briefly,

'Brief' is an adjective; the adverb 'Briefly' is needed here to modify the verb or sentence appropriately.

× I prefer handwriting because it has been my foundations in childhood and I find it more personal and effective for remembering if remembering information.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it has been my foundation since childhood and I find it more personal and effective for remembering information.

'Foundations' should be singular 'foundation' to match the singular subject. 'Since childhood' is the correct prepositional phrase. Also, 'if remembering information' is incorrect and should be 'for remembering information'.

× Although typing is faster, I feel that writing by hand is more convenient, better experience.

✓ Although typing is faster, I feel that writing by hand is more convenient and a better experience.

The phrase 'more convenient, better experience' lacks a conjunction and article. Adding 'and a' connects the two qualities properly.