Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more coherent and fluent by avoiding pauses and incomplete sentences. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you write less now, and finish with when you still write.

예시: I used to write a lot in the past, but nowadays I don't write as much because I feel a bit lazy. However, I still prefer to write notes occasionally, especially when I have a lot of information to review. This helps me organise my thoughts better.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to express your ideas clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, be specific about what you like to write and why. Keep your answer concise and relevant.

예시: When I was a child, I used to write romantic stories. Nowadays, I prefer writing about my personal experiences because it helps me focus on my mental well-being and stay calm.

제안: Try to avoid fragmented sentences and be more precise in your explanation. Use linking words to make your answer flow logically. Also, clarify how your writing has changed over time with specific examples.

예시: Yes, I believe the things I write have changed over time. When I was younger, I mainly wrote notes, but now I write to express my feelings and emotions more deeply.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words to connect your ideas. Also, correct minor grammar mistakes such as 'an typing' to 'typing'. Keep your answer concise and structured.

예시: It depends on the task. For assignments, I prefer typing because it's required by my college. However, when I write about my feelings or take notes, I find handwriting more convenient and personal.

× I used to write a lot, but in my present days I don't prefer writing.

✓ I used to write a lot, but these days I don't prefer writing.

The phrase 'in my present days' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'these days' to indicate the current time period.

× I have become very lazy person nowadays, that's why I don't.

✓ I have become a very lazy person nowadays, that's why I don't.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'very lazy person'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'I don't.' which is incomplete; it should be connected to the next idea or completed.

× Write often, but sometimes I do prefer writing something like notes are maybe when I have to go through a lot I do.

✓ I don't write often, but sometimes I do prefer writing something like notes, maybe when I have to go through a lot.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× When I was a kid I used to write a lot of points, mostly the romantic one, but nowadays I prefer writing whenever high had 20 whenever I goes through some.

✓ When I was a kid I used to write a lot of points, mostly romantic ones, but nowadays I prefer writing whenever I go through some.

The phrase 'the romantic one' should be plural 'romantic ones' to agree with 'a lot of points'. Also, 'I goes' is incorrect; it should be 'I go'.

× That experience and. It has helped me to focus on my mental well-being also and stay calm.

✓ That experience has helped me to focus on my mental well-being and stay calm.

The sentence is fragmented and contains an unnecessary period. It should be combined into a single coherent sentence.

× Yes, of course, some by the time.

✓ Yes, of course, some change over time.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs additional words to convey the intended meaning.

× I think the way of writing has changed a lot because there's.

✓ I think the way of writing has changed a lot because of that.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'there's.' which is incomplete. It needs to be completed for clarity.

× Like I have mentioned before, I used to write a point when I was young, but now I write.

✓ Like I have mentioned before, I used to write points when I was young, but now I write.

The phrase 'a point' should be plural 'points' to match the context of writing multiple items.

× To express my feelings and. My motions.

✓ To express my feelings and emotions.

The sentence is fragmented and contains a typo 'My motions' instead of 'emotions'. It should be combined into one sentence.

× If I have to do some assignments, I do prefer typing because it's the policy of the college.

✓ If I have to do some assignments, I prefer typing because it's the policy of the college.

The phrase 'do prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' alone is sufficient and more natural.

× But if I'm writing about my feelings and even if I'm taking notes, I do prefer writing rather than an typing.

✓ But if I'm writing about my feelings and even if I'm taking notes, I prefer writing rather than typing.

The article 'an' before 'typing' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'do prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' is sufficient.

× It is more convenient to write rather than typing.

✓ It is more convenient to write rather than type.

The comparison should be between two parallel forms: 'write' and 'type', not 'write' and 'typing'.