Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınızda anlam bütünlüğü ve akıcılık eksik. Cümlelerinizi daha doğal ve akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz duraklamalardan kaçının ve düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin. Ayrıca, soruya doğrudan yanıt verip, yazma alışkanlıklarınız hakkında daha spesifik bilgiler verin.

예시: I used to read a lot when I was a child, but nowadays I don't read much because of my feelings. However, I find writing relaxing and try to write whenever I can.

제안: Cümlenizde anlam bozuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve doğru bir şekilde ifade etmek için cümle yapınızı geliştirin. Ayrıca, neden günlük yazmayı sevdiğinizi daha net açıklayın ve bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

예시: I love journaling because it helps me stay organized. Writing in my journal at the beginning of the day makes me more efficient and focused.

제안: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları mevcut. Düşüncelerinizi daha açık ve tutarlı ifade etmek için cümlelerinizi sadeleştirin ve bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı bir akış oluşturun. Yazdıklarınızın neden değişebileceğini daha spesifik örneklerle açıklayın.

예시: Absolutely, I think what I write changes because my lifestyle and feelings change over time. Since writing reflects my thoughts and emotions, it naturally evolves.

제안: Cümlelerinizde anlam kopuklukları ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, tercihlerinizi açıkça belirtip nedenlerini açıklayarak cevabınızı zenginleştirin.

예시: It depends on the situation. When I am outside, I prefer typing on my phone because it's convenient. However, when I have the chance, I like writing with pen and paper because it feels more personal.

× In my childhood I read a lot.

✓ In my childhood, I used to read a lot.

The sentence refers to a habitual action in the past, so 'used to' is more appropriate than simple past 'read' to express repeated past actions.

× But nowadays I can't read becauses because. Of my. Feelings.

✓ But nowadays I can't read because of my feelings.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repetition and misplaced periods. It should be combined into a single coherent sentence with correct conjunction and preposition usage.

× I know writing gets me relax.

✓ I know writing helps me relax.

The verb 'gets' is incorrectly used with 'relax' (a verb). The correct expression is 'helps me relax' or 'makes me relax' to indicate the effect of writing.

× But.

This is a sentence fragment and should be removed or connected to the previous sentence.

× I I love journaling and as I know journal link if.

✓ I love journaling because I know journaling helps.

The original sentence is unclear and contains repetition and incorrect conjunction usage. 'Because' is the correct conjunction to explain the reason.

× Gets us more or well organized.

✓ It helps us be more organized.

The sentence lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. 'It' refers to journaling, and 'helps us be more organized' is the correct structure.

× At the joint journal link in the beginning of the day, it gets me efficient.

✓ By journaling at the beginning of the day, it makes me more efficient.

The phrase 'joint journal link' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correct idiomatic expression.

× Absolutely yes, because our brain, I'll, our lifestyle is changing day by day and writing things.

✓ Absolutely yes, because our brain and our lifestyle are changing day by day, and writing things

The phrase 'I'll' is incorrect here; 'and' is the correct conjunction. Also, subject-verb agreement is corrected for 'brain and lifestyle are'.

× Is depend on our lifestyle and our feelings and.

✓ depends on our lifestyle and our feelings.

The verb 'is' should be 'depends' to agree with the subject 'writing things'. Also, the sentence should not end with 'and'.

× I know feelings are changing and challenge.

✓ I know feelings are changing and challenging.

The word 'challenge' is incorrectly used as a noun; the adjective 'challenging' correctly describes the feelings.

× At it depends on the station.

✓ It depends on the situation.

'At' is incorrectly used; the correct phrase is 'It depends on the situation.' Also, 'station' is likely a mishearing of 'situation'.

× When I am outside and want to write something, I use my phone to type something, but when I.

✓ When I am outside and want to write something, I use my phone to type, but when I

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly; it should be connected to the next sentence for completeness.

× Available to write with pen and pencil.

✓ am available to write with pen and paper.

The phrase is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. 'Pen and pencil' is less common than 'pen and paper' for writing.

× A pen and paper I prefer.

✓ I prefer pen and paper.

The sentence order is incorrect; the subject should come before the object for natural English word order.