Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如"summarize"应为"summary"，"swords"应为"words"，句子结构不够清晰。建议加强语法基础，注意单复数和词性变化，同时使句子更简洁自然。

예시: I don't write very often, but sometimes I like to write a monthly or weekly summary. This helps me organize my thoughts and better plan activities for the upcoming months. It also allows me to reflect on my progress and decide clearly on my future goals.

제안: 回答中多次出现拼写错误，如"sword"应为"words"，"pressures"应为"pressure"，且句子结构重复。建议注意拼写准确，避免重复表达，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer to write short texts and summaries because they help me organize my thoughts and clear my mind, especially at night. Moreover, writing allows me to express my feelings and reduce stress, providing emotional support when I feel overwhelmed.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如"thing"应为复数"things"，"knows"应为"know"，句子不连贯。建议加强语法练习，使用正确时态和主谓一致，并使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I believe the things I write definitely change over time. For example, when I look back at my previous writing, I feel surprised by the words and ideas I used before because people's opinions and perspectives have evolved. I have also gained more experience.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，如"preferred"应为"prefer"，表达不够清晰，且有拼写错误。建议注意时态一致，表达清楚完整，并避免口语缩写。

예시: Recently, I prefer to type on my computer because I use my laptop almost every day. Typing is very convenient and efficient. However, in the past, I preferred handwriting because it felt more meaningful and gave me a fresh feeling every month.

× I don't write very often, but sometimes I like to write a monthly or weekly's summarize, which help me organize my swords and better plan activity for upcoming months.

✓ I don't write very often, but sometimes I like to write a monthly or weekly summary, which helps me organize my words and better plan activities for upcoming months.

这里'summarize'应为名词'summary'，且'monthly or weekly's'结构不正确，应直接用'monthly or weekly summary'。'help'应为第三人称单数形式'helps'，因为主语是单数'summary'。'swords'应为'words'，拼写错误。'activity'应为复数'activities'，因为指多个活动。

× This allows made to reflect how my progress and decide to Claire go for the future.

✓ This allows me to reflect on my progress and decide clearly how to go for the future.

'allows made'应为'allows me'，'made'是错误的过去式。'reflect'后应加介词'on'。'Claire go'应为'clearly how to go'，'Claire'拼写错误且句子结构不正确。

× I prefer to write a short text and summary because it helped me organize my sword and clear my mind, especially at night.

✓ I prefer to write short texts and summaries because they help me organize my words and clear my mind, especially at night.

'a short text and summary'应为复数形式'short texts and summaries'，因为表达的是一般习惯。'helped'应为现在时'help'，与前文时态一致。'sword'应为'word'，拼写错误。

× Writing also allows me to express my own feelings and reduce pressures.

✓ Writing also allows me to express my own feelings and reduce pressure.

'pressures'通常用不可数名词'pressure'，表示压力的总称。

× It definitely provides me a support emotional support when I feel overwhelmed.

✓ It definitely provides me emotional support when I feel overwhelmed.

'a support emotional support'结构重复且错误，应去掉'a support'，保留'emotional support'。

× Yes, I believe the thing that I write definitely change over time.

✓ Yes, I believe the things that I write definitely change over time.

'thing'应为复数'things'，因为后文说的是多件事物。

× For example, when I look back at my previous writing and knows I feel surprised by the words and ideas that I used before because people's opinion and perspective have evolved.

✓ For example, when I look back at my previous writing and know, I feel surprised by the words and ideas that I used before because people's opinions and perspectives have evolved.

'knows'应为第一人称单数形式'know'。'opinion'和'perspective'应为复数形式'opinions'和'perspectives'，因为指多种观点。

× ID have learned more experience.

✓ I have learned more from experience.

'ID'应为'I'，拼写错误。'learned more experience'表达不自然，应为'learned more from experience'。

× Recently I preferred to type on my computer because I almost use my laptop every day.

✓ Recently I prefer to type on my computer because I almost use my laptop every day.

'Recently'表示最近，通常用现在时'prefer'，而非过去时'preferred'。

× However, in the past I prefer handwriting be 'cause it gives me more meaningful and this every month new fillings.

✓ However, in the past I preferred handwriting because it gave me more meaningful and new feelings every month.

'prefer'应为过去时'preferred'，与'in the past'时间状语一致。'be 'cause'应为'because'。'meaningful'后缺少名词，且表达不完整，改为'gave me more meaningful and new feelings every month'更通顺。