Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Use clear sentence structures and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a direct response, then explain why you write a lot with specific reasons, using linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I write quite a lot because I always keep a notebook to jot down important things I learn. This helps me improve my writing skills and makes it easier to remember information.

제안: Clarify your answer and correct vocabulary and grammar mistakes. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why you like writing diaries.

예시: I like writing daily diaries because they help me store important memories. Also, writing regularly improves my writing skills and allows me to reflect on my experiences.

제안: Make your answer more complete and coherent. Use correct verb forms and provide a clear example to support your opinion. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I believe the things I write can change over time because sometimes I write about my dreams or desires, which may not come true. For example, before graduation, I thought I would choose business as my major, but I changed my mind later.

제안: Improve your answer by correcting grammar and vocabulary errors. Use linking words to compare your preferences clearly and provide specific reasons for each choice.

예시: It depends on what I am writing. If I am taking a test, I prefer typing on my computer because it is faster and more convenient. However, for daily diary entries, I prefer handwriting in a notebook because it feels more personal.

× Yes, I think so because whenever I learned, I have a notebook to note some importing things that I have learned.

✓ Yes, I think so because whenever I learn, I have a notebook to note some important things that I have learned.

The verb 'learned' is incorrectly used in the past tense when the present tense 'learn' is appropriate to indicate a habitual action. Also, 'importing' is a typo and should be 'important'.

× So. I need a writing a lot not only improve my writing skill but also help me easy to remember.

✓ So, I need to write a lot not only to improve my writing skills but also to help me remember easily.

The phrase 'a writing a lot' is incorrect; it should be 'to write a lot'. Also, 'help me easy to remember' is incorrect; it should be 'help me remember easily'. The infinitive form 'to' is needed before verbs after 'need' and 'help'.

× Well, I love Brighton Diaries every day because I can store important memories and read it again whenever I want a plus.

✓ Well, I love writing diaries every day because I can store important memories and read them again whenever I want.

'Brighton Diaries' seems incorrect or a typo; 'writing diaries' fits better. Also, 'read it again' is incorrect because 'memories' is plural, so 'read them again' is correct. 'A plus' is unnecessary and unclear, so it is removed.

× It not only helped me improve my skill but also we ate less long memories for me.

✓ It not only helps me improve my skills but also helps me retain long-lasting memories.

The sentence has unclear pronoun use and incorrect words. 'We ate less long memories' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper pronouns and verbs.

× Yes, I think the things I dry my change over time because sometimes I'd write down my dreams or desires but I'm not sure if they will actually happen.

✓ Yes, I think the things I write may change over time because sometimes I write down my dreams or desires but I'm not sure if they will actually happen.

'Dry my' is a typo and should be 'write may'. The modal verb 'may' is appropriate to express possibility. Also, 'I'd write' should be 'I write' to maintain tense consistency.

× For example, before the graduation I think I will choose business but.

✓ For example, before graduation, I thought I would choose business, but I changed my mind.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Before the graduation' should be 'before graduation'. The sentence needs completion to make sense, so an ending clause is added.

× Well, it depends on what I'd ride.

✓ Well, it depends on what I write.

'I'd ride' is a typo; it should be 'I write' to match the context of writing.

× If I write a test, I will type on my computer because it faster and more convenient.

✓ If I write a test, I will type on my computer because it is faster and more convenient.

The verb 'is' is missing before 'faster'. Also, 'write a test' is acceptable but 'take a test' is more common; however, 'write a test' is kept as per original meaning.

× In contrast, if I write a diary daily, I will use a notebook to dry because it is more.

✓ In contrast, if I write a diary daily, I will use a notebook to write because it is more convenient.

'Dry' is a typo and should be 'write'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'it is more'; 'convenient' is added to complete the thought.