Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan struktur kalimat agar jawaban lebih natural dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan kata dan gunakan kalimat yang jelas dan langsung ke poin utama.

예시: Yes, I write quite often because it is part of my daily routine. For example, I write reports at work and keep a diary every day, which helps me track and organize my tasks.

제안: Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda menyukai menulis. Hindari kalimat yang tidak lengkap dan gunakan kosa kata yang sesuai.

예시: I like to write in my diary because it doesn't require much effort, and it helps me relax without feeling stressed.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih koheren untuk menyampaikan pendapat Anda. Jelaskan dengan contoh atau alasan yang spesifik.

예시: Yes, I believe what we write can change over time, especially opinions, because people’s thoughts and feelings may evolve.

제안: Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur. Jelaskan alasan preferensi Anda dengan detail yang relevan dan gunakan kosa kata yang tepat.

예시: I prefer typing because it is easier and more convenient than handwriting. You don't need a pen or paper, and you won't run out of supplies. Also, typed documents look more professional.

× Yes, I I quite often writing because it is something that I do every day, such as like in. Up at at my works and also to write a diary's everyday and it actually helped me to track and organize things.

✓ Yes, I quite often write because it is something that I do every day, such as at my work and also writing a diary every day, and it actually helps me to track and organize things.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'writing' after 'I quite often' which requires the base verb form 'write'. Also, 'diary's' is incorrect; it should be 'diary' without an apostrophe. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency. Suggestions: Use base verb after adverbs like 'quite often' and maintain consistent tense.

× Yes, I I quite often writing because it is something that I do every day, such as like in. Up at at my works and also to write a diary's everyday and it actually helped me to track and organize things.

✓ Yes, I quite often write because it is something that I do every day, such as at my work and also writing a diary every day, and it actually helps me to track and organize things.

The phrase 'such as like in. Up at at my works' is incorrect and confusing. The correct preposition is 'at' for locations like 'my work'. Also, 'works' should be singular 'work' when referring to one's job. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions and singular form for 'work' when referring to job.

× Yes, I I quite often writing because it is something that I do every day, such as like in. Up at at my works and also to write a diary's everyday and it actually helped me to track and organize things.

✓ Yes, I quite often write because it is something that I do every day, such as at my work and also writing a diary every day, and it actually helps me to track and organize things.

The word 'diary's' is incorrectly pluralized with an apostrophe. It should be 'diary' as a singular noun. Also, 'works' should be 'work' when referring to employment. Suggestions: Use correct singular and plural forms without unnecessary apostrophes.

× I like to write. Like a diary book. Because it's something that I think I don't need a lot of effort to things. So like I can write. Is Lee Ann not feeling really stressful to writing?

✓ I like to write, like a diary. Because I think it doesn't require a lot of effort. So I can write without feeling really stressed.

The original sentence misuses prepositions such as 'to things' and 'to writing'. The correct expressions are 'require effort' without 'to' and 'feeling stressed' without 'to'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions with verbs and adjectives.

× Is Lee Ann not feeling really stressful to writing?

✓ I do not feel really stressed when writing.

The adjective 'stressful' describes something that causes stress, not a feeling. The correct adjective to describe a feeling is 'stressed'. Also, the sentence structure is incorrect. Suggestions: Use 'stressed' to describe feelings and correct sentence structure.

× Yes. I think. A writing. Are words that. Written it's some thing that can be occasionally change, like opinions, like words. I think it's depends on what people right?

✓ Yes, I think writing and the words that are written can occasionally change, like opinions and words. I think it depends on what people write.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'A writing' is incorrect; 'writing' is uncountable. 'Are words that. Written' is fragmented. 'Change' should be 'change' without 'can be occasionally' rearranged. 'Right' should be 'write'. Suggestions: Use complete sentences, correct verb forms, and proper word order.

× Yes. I think. A writing. Are words that. Written it's some thing that can be occasionally change, like opinions, like words. I think it's depends on what people right?

✓ Yes, I think writing and the words that are written can occasionally change, like opinions and words. I think it depends on what people write.

The phrase 'depends on what people right' misuses 'right' instead of 'write'. Also, 'depends on' is the correct prepositional phrase. Suggestions: Use correct verb forms and prepositions.

× I prefer typing because it more. Easy. It's easier than handwriting. You don't need pan, you don't need paper. Like you just I think there is no time where you run ruin out of the things. So I think it's more official.

✓ I prefer typing because it is easier. It's easier than handwriting. You don't need a pen or paper. I think you never run out of supplies. So I think it's more official.

'Pan' is a wrong word; it should be 'pen'. 'You just I think' is confusing and incorrect pronoun use. 'Run ruin out' is incorrect; it should be 'run out'. Suggestions: Use correct pronouns and vocabulary for clarity.