Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，缺乏连贯性和逻辑性。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免语法错误和无关内容。

예시: I don't write a lot because I find writing boring. Instead, I prefer taking photos to capture information visually.

제안: 回答中有语法和发音错误，表达不够流畅。建议直接回答问题，并用简单句子说明原因。

예시: I like to write plans because I often forget things. Writing helps me remember important tasks.

제안: 回答内容混乱，难以理解。建议先明确回答问题，再用具体例子或理由支持观点。

예시: Yes, what I write has changed a lot. When I was young, I wrote simple notes, but now I write detailed plans and ideas.

제안: 表达有些混乱，但能传达基本意思。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feeling of the pen touching the paper. It helps me relax and think more clearly.

× I like a take photos or picture.

✓ I like to take photos or pictures.

这里应该使用不定式短语'to take'，而不是'a take'。'a'是冠词，不能直接跟动词原形。建议使用'to take'表示喜欢做某事。

× I like a take photos or picture.

✓ I like to take photos or pictures.

'photos'是复数，'picture'是单数，应该保持一致。这里用复数形式更合适，表示喜欢拍摄多张照片。

× I want to get some information in pictures or photos.

✓ I want to get some information from pictures or photos.

表达“从图片中获取信息”时，应该用介词'from'，而不是'in'。

× I like to rise some plans 'cause my man, I don't remember so many sales and I needed to write some, some plans on the paper to have me remember.

✓ I like to write some plans because sometimes I don't remember many things and I need to write some plans on paper to help me remember.

'rise'是错误动词，应该用'write'表示写计划。'cause'应写为'because'。'my man'应为'sometimes'。'sales'应为'things'或其他合适词。'have me remember'应改为'help me remember'。

× I needed to write some, some plans on the paper to have me remember.

✓ I need to write some plans on paper to help me remember.

这里表达的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时'need'，而不是过去时'needed'。

× I sent her eyes saw how a large change because when I was a kid or young I I already read some saying like a by snakes or gift, but I don't know I will write something I already read some plans after.

✓ I can see how a large change has happened because when I was a kid or young, I already read some sayings like 'by snakes' or 'gift', but I don't know if I will write something after reading some plans.

'I sent her eyes saw'应为'I can see'或类似表达。'a by snakes or gift'不清楚，可能是谚语，应用引号。时态和句子结构需要调整。

× Will I like handwriting becaused weihai writing something I listen the pen touch the paper.

✓ I like handwriting because when writing something, I listen to the pen touching the paper.

'Will I like'应为'I like'。'becaused'应为'because'。'weihai'应为'when'。'listen the pen'应为'listen to the pen'。

× I sent her a it'll make me so cleared under relax.

✓ It makes me feel so clear and relaxed.

'I sent her a'无意义，应删除。'cleared under relax'表达错误，应改为'feel clear and relaxed'。