Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Ответ должен быть более ясным и структурированным. Избегайте повторений и неясных фраз. Постарайтесь дать прямой ответ с поддерживающими деталями, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: Yes, I write quite often, especially for school exams. I find writing easy because I have a good vocabulary. Also, I enjoy writing in my free time.

제안: Ответ слишком короткий и неясный. Нужно конкретизировать, что именно вы любите писать и почему, используя связующие слова для плавности речи.

예시: I like to write short stories and poems because they allow me to express my creativity and feelings.

제안: Ответ нечеткий и содержит много пауз. Следует строить предложения более связно и конкретно, объясняя, как и почему ваши тексты могут измениться.

예시: Yes, I think my writing will change in the future. For example, I might start writing more romance and short stories as I gain experience.

제안: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует четко выразить предпочтение и объяснить причину, используя связующие слова для логичности.

예시: I prefer handwriting because typing feels less personal to me. Handwriting helps me think more clearly and enjoy the writing process.

× For me, so Rodney exam like aisles are all their school exams.

✓ For me, Rodney's exams like aisles are all their school exams.

The original sentence has unclear structure and word usage, making it difficult to understand. The correction clarifies the subject and possessive form, improving sentence clarity.

× For me it is so easy because I have a lot of.

✓ For me, it is so easy because I have a lot of practice.

The original sentence ends abruptly and lacks an object after 'a lot of'. Adding 'practice' completes the sentence and clarifies the meaning.

× That is, of wards are all the and I also like to write.

✓ That is, all the words are there, and I also like to write.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction rearranges words to form a coherent sentence.

× To be honest, I don't know because I don't have.

✓ To be honest, I don't know because I don't have a specific reason.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'have'. Adding 'a specific reason' completes the thought.

× Such. Site of writing.

✓ Such a site for writing.

The original phrase is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a proper noun phrase.

× I just like to write. And all.

✓ I just like to write and so on.

The phrase 'and all' is informal and unclear. Replacing it with 'and so on' makes the sentence more natural.

× Yeah. It can be. Change in the future.

✓ Yeah, it can change in the future.

The original sentence incorrectly separates 'can be' and 'change'. The modal verb 'can' should be directly followed by the base verb 'change'.

× So. In that moment, I just. Guess the future that I would to change my stories, romance, short stories and also.

✓ So, at that moment, I just guess that in the future I would change my stories, including romance and short stories.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains incorrect verb forms. The correction improves sentence flow and verb usage.

× Yeah, special I prefer. Two hand writing becauses typewriting actually.

✓ Yeah, especially I prefer handwriting because typewriting actually

The original sentence misuses 'special' instead of 'especially' and 'two hand writing' instead of 'handwriting'. The correction fixes these prepositional and word choice errors.

× Give me. I thought. Short. Xperience Venza Handwriting.

✓ gives me a short experience versus handwriting.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction forms a coherent phrase comparing typing and handwriting experiences.