Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“I'm a English major students”应为“I'm an English major student”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，避免冗余，保持语言自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I write a lot because I am an English major student. Writing is a big part of my daily studies, so I often have many writing assignments to complete.

제안: 回答中有多处发音或拼写错误，如“right in Nobles”应为“writing novels”，且表达重复且不连贯。建议注意发音准确，避免重复，使用连贯的句子表达观点。

예시: I enjoy writing novels because I like creating new worlds in my imagination. It is very satisfying to build stories and characters that are interesting and unique.

제안: 回答表达了观点并给出例子，但存在语法和用词错误，如“the same guy right In the change”不清晰。建议注意句子结构和词汇准确性，使表达更清楚。

예시: Yes, I believe my writing changes over time. As I gain more experience and knowledge, my style and ideas evolve. For example, my writing used to be simpler, but now I try to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“can see at the university students”不通顺，且“piping”应为“typing”。建议注意语法准确，句子完整，避免拼写错误。

예시: In the past, I preferred handwriting because I was a middle school student and computers were not allowed. However, now at university, I prefer typing since most of my homework is done on the computer.

× I'm a English major students so I do a lot of writing assignments in my daily study.

✓ I'm an English major student so I do a lot of writing assignments in my daily study.

这里的'students'应为单数'student'，因为前面用的是单数冠词'a'，主语是单数。'English'前应使用'an'而非'a'，因为'English'发音以元音音素开头。

× So writing becomes a very common partners by school life so I do write a lot services.

✓ So writing becomes a very common part of school life, so I do write a lot of essays.

'partners'应为单数'noun'，这里应为'part'，表示'部分'。'by school life'应改为'of school life'，表示所属关系。'services'不符合语境，应改为'assignments'或'essays'。

× I would say right in Nobles is my cup of tea because I enjoy the process of building another world in my mind and use my imagination to create something very interesting.

✓ I would say writing novels is my cup of tea because I enjoy the process of building another world in my mind and using my imagination to create something very interesting.

'right in Nobles'应为'writing novels'，是拼写错误。动词'and use'前应加动名词形式，保持结构一致。

× Are so nice. Farhan I really enjoy writing novels.

✓ Also, I really enjoy writing novels.

句子不完整且拼写错误，'Are so nice. Farhan'无意义，应改为'Also'表示补充。

× Do you think the things you write would change?

✓ Do you think the things you write will change?

这里表示对未来的推测，应该用一般将来时的助动词'will'，而非'would'。

× Yes, I believe the same guy right In the change over time, as I came more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to revolve.

✓ Yes, I believe the same writing changes over time, as I gain more experience and knowledge, my writing style and ideas tend to evolve.

'guy right In the change'是错误表达，应为'writing changes'。'came'应为现在时'gain'，表示持续获得。'revolve'用词不当，应为'evolve'表示发展变化。

× For example, when I was younger my writing was simpler, but now I'm trying to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

✓ For example, when I was younger, my writing was simpler, but now I'm trying to express my thoughts more clearly and creatively.

此句语法正确，仅需加逗号以增强可读性。

× I would say in the past I preferred handwriting because at that point I was just in middle school student and computer was not allowed in my daily life.

✓ I would say in the past I preferred handwriting because at that point I was just a middle school student and computers were not allowed in my daily life.

'middle school student'前缺少冠词'a'。'computer'应为复数'computers'，因为泛指多台电脑。谓语动词应与复数主语一致，故用'were'。

× However, can see at the university students I prefer typing because most of my homework are finished by piping so.

✓ However, now at university, I prefer typing because most of my homework is finished by typing.

'can see'缺主语，应为'now'或'now I can see'。'homework'是不可数名词，谓语用单数'is'。'piping'应为'typing'拼写错误。