Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然且表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题并补充具体细节。

예시: No, I don't write a lot because I find it difficult. However, I like to write about my daily experiences and feelings to remember them better.

제안: 回答内容较好，但表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议使用连词使句子更连贯，并注意时态和单复数。

예시: I like to write in my diary because it allows me to record what happened each day and how I felt. Later, when I read it, I can relive those moments, which is very interesting.

제안: 回答内容混乱且难以理解，缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议先明确观点，再用简单句表达，并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, I think my writing will change. When I was younger, I liked reading imaginary stories, but now I prefer reading newspapers and research articles because I find them more interesting.

제안: 回答表达不够清晰，句子结构混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词连接理由。

예시: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy the feeling of writing on paper. However, typing is more convenient when I need to write quickly.

× No, I'm not good at writing scenes, but I would like to write something what Tax experienced today and.

✓ No, I'm not good at writing scenes, but I would like to write something that Tax experienced today.

这里“something what”是不正确的表达，应该用关系代词“that”来引导定语从句，表示“某事物”。建议用“something that”替代“something what”。

× My expressions I will to write down too.

✓ I will write down my expressions too.

句子结构混乱，且“will to write”是不正确的，情态动词“will”后应直接接动词原形。建议调整句子顺序并去掉“to”。

× I like to read diary because you know you can write down what happened today and what is your mood and after a period of time when you open it, you can go back to that day.

✓ I like to read diaries because you know you can write down what happened today and what your mood is, and after a period of time when you open it, you can go back to that day.

“diary”应使用复数形式“diaries”，表示日记的集合。

× That's a interesting experience.

✓ That's an interesting experience.

“interesting”前应使用不定冠词“an”，因为“interesting”以元音音素开头。

× Maybe while I was later I like to read some no world and there's some imaginary story, but when I get older I just read some papers and the research that more board I think.

✓ Maybe when I was younger, I liked to read some novels and some imaginary stories, but when I got older, I just read some papers and research that is broader, I think.

时态混乱，需将“was later”改为“was younger”，动词时态保持一致，且“no world”应为“novels”，“research that more board”应为“research that is broader”。

× Will I prefer handwriting because I like to touch the papers and feel the.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I like to touch the paper and feel it.

“Will I prefer”用法错误，表达习惯应为“I prefer”。

× Touch will and writing on the paper.

✓ The touch and writing on the paper.

句子结构不完整且不通顺，应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× Just feeling can't be replaced, but typing is more convenient.

✓ The feeling can't be replaced, but typing is more convenient.

“Just feeling”表达不准确，应为“the feeling”表示特指的感觉。