Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“becauses UM going to take part in the else writing test”不符合英语表达习惯。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和连词，使表达更流畅自然。

예시: Yes, I have been writing a lot recently because I am preparing for an important writing test.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“environmental situations”和“in nowadays version is become more diversity”表达不清晰。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，清楚表达自己的观点。

예시: I prefer to write about environmental issues because they are becoming more diverse and important nowadays, which makes me think deeply about them.

제안: 回答中时态使用不当，且表达不连贯，如“always write son romantic novels”和“hope I can become a princis”有语法和拼写错误。建议注意时态一致，使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: Absolutely. When I was a child, I always wrote romantic novels because I hoped to become a prince in my stories. But now, I prefer to write about social issues.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，如“When I typing”和“add some news? Content”不清楚。建议使用正确的时态和完整句子表达观点。

예시: When I write, I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because it is more convenient. Typing on a computer allows me to easily delete or add content at any time.

× Yes, I often write recently becauses UM going to take part in the else writing test, so I. Write a lot to prepare for it.

✓ Yes, I have been writing a lot recently because I am going to take part in the IELTS writing test, so I write a lot to prepare for it.

句子中使用了“often write recently”，时态不正确，应该用现在完成进行时表示最近一直在写作。此外，“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”，“UM”是口语填充词，应去除或替换，“else writing test”应为“IELTS writing test”。建议使用正确时态和拼写。

× Yes, I often write recently becauses UM going to take part in the else writing test, so I. Write a lot to prepare for it.

✓ Yes, I have been writing a lot recently because I am going to take part in the IELTS writing test, so I write a lot to prepare for it.

短语“take part in”中的介词“in”使用正确，但原句中“going to take part in the else writing test”中的“else”用法错误，应为“IELTS”。介词使用正确，但词汇错误导致表达不清。

× What do you like to write? Why? Student: I prefer to write about environmental situations because I think in nowadays version is become more diversity.

✓ I prefer to write about environmental issues because I think nowadays the environment is becoming more diverse.

“environmental situations”应改为“environmental issues”，更符合表达习惯；“version”用词错误，应为“environment”；“diversity”是名词，句中应使用形容词“diverse”；句子结构不清晰，需调整。

× I prefer to write about environmental situations because I think in nowadays version is become more diversity.

✓ I prefer to write about environmental issues because I think nowadays the environment is becoming more diverse.

“diversity”是名词，句中应使用形容词“diverse”来修饰环境；“is become”时态错误，应为“is becoming”。

× This topical can make me considerable it.

✓ This topic makes me consider it carefully.

“topical”是形容词，应该用名词“topic”；“make me considerable it”结构错误，应为“make me consider it”；“considerable”是形容词，错误使用。

× Absolutely, when I was a child I always write son romantic novels because, UM, hope I can become a princis.

✓ Absolutely, when I was a child I always wrote some romantic novels because I hoped I could become a prince.

描述过去习惯动作应使用过去时“wrote”；“son”应为“some”；“hope”应为过去时“hoped”；“princis”拼写错误，应为“prince”。

× Absolutely, when I was a child I always write son romantic novels because, UM, hope I can become a princis.

✓ Absolutely, when I was a child I always wrote some romantic novels because I hoped I could become a prince.

“son”应为复数“some”，表示一些；“princis”应为单数“prince”，拼写错误。

× In this story, but now I prefer to write about social issues.

✓ In those stories, but now I prefer to write about social issues.

“story”应为复数“stories”，与前文“always wrote some romantic novels”呼应。

× When I do some writing, I definitely prefer typing then handwriting because I think it's more convenient.

✓ When I do some writing, I definitely prefer typing to handwriting because I think it's more convenient.

“prefer”后应接介词“to”表示偏好，“prefer typing then handwriting”中的“then”应为“to”。

× When I typing on the computer I can do some. Uh, delete or add some news? Content anytime.

✓ When I type on the computer, I can delete or add some new content anytime.

“When I typing”应为“when I type”，动词形式错误；“news?”应为“new”；句子断裂，应连贯表达。