Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“write in computer”应为“write on the computer”。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复表达“convenient and portable”，并且注意冠词和介词的正确使用。

예시: No, I don't write much by hand because I usually type on my computer. It's very convenient and portable, so I can write anytime and anywhere.

제안: 回答应更连贯，避免断句不完整。可以用连词连接句子，使表达更自然。同时，时间表达应准确，如“before today”不太合适，建议用“every evening”。

예시: I like to write my to-do list every evening because I think it's important to plan my schedule and manage my time effectively.

제안: 回答中存在很多语法和表达错误，句子不完整且不连贯。建议练习完整句子表达，明确观点，并用连词连接句子，使回答更自然和逻辑清晰。

예시: No, I don't think the things I write will change because I use my to-do list consistently to manage my tasks, no matter what happens.

제안: 回答中断句不完整，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和断句错误，同时可以丰富词汇表达原因。

예시: I definitely prefer typing because it's faster and produces neater text. Also, my handwriting is quite poor, so typing is more comfortable for me.

× I often write in computer.

✓ I often write on the computer.

介词使用错误，英语中通常说“write on the computer”而不是“write in computer”。“on”表示在计算机这个设备上操作。

× And I can write in any time, anywhere.

✓ And I can write at any time, anywhere.

时间表达中应使用介词“at”表示具体时间点，故应为“at any time”。

× I would like to write my to do list. Before today. On the evening.

✓ I would like to write my to-do list before today, in the evening.

句子结构不完整且断裂，应合并为完整句子，且“in the evening”表示时间段，需用介词“in”。

× No, I don't think my. Things I write will change.

✓ No, I don't think the things I write will change.

“my”后面缺少名词，且此处应使用定冠词“the”指代特定的事物。

× It is permanently.

✓ It is permanent.

“permanently”是副词，修饰动词或形容词，此处应使用形容词“permanent”来描述状态。

× And I will consistently. In. In to manage my to do list, finally, no matter what happens.

✓ And I will consistently manage my to-do list, no matter what happens.

句子断裂且不完整，应合并为完整句子，去除多余词汇。

× And it. It's good looking.

✓ And it looks good.

“good looking”通常用作形容词短语修饰人，此处描述物品外观应使用“looks good”。

× By the way, my handwriting is bad. So I prefer. Typing it makes me.

✓ By the way, my handwriting is bad, so I prefer typing. It makes me happy.

句子断裂且不完整，应合并为完整句子，并补充缺失内容使表达完整。