Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan penggunaan kata yang kurang tepat. Cobalah untuk membuat kalimat yang lebih alami dan efektif dengan memperbaiki struktur kalimat dan menghindari pengulangan. Misalnya, gunakan "I keep a journal sometimes" bukan "I do keep it journal sometimes" dan "I usually write on my phone because it is easier and more convenient than using a notebook."

예시: I don't write very often, but I sometimes keep a journal. I usually write on my phone because it is easier and more convenient than using a notebook. Writing helps me organize my thoughts and remember important things.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup jelas dan terstruktur dengan baik. Namun, Anda bisa memperbaiki penggunaan kata dan membuat kalimat lebih alami dengan menghilangkan kata yang tidak perlu dan memperbaiki tata bahasa. Misalnya, gunakan "a to-do list" bukan "A to do list" dan hindari pengulangan kata seperti "help" dalam kalimat terakhir.

예시: I like to write a to-do list every day because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. By listing the tasks I need to complete, I can prioritize them based on urgency and ensure I don't forget anything important. This approach keeps me focused and productive throughout the day.

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak terstruktur dengan baik. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung dan lengkap dengan kalimat yang jelas dan logis. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren dan spesifik dalam menjelaskan alasan Anda.

예시: The things I write can change sometimes, but usually they stay the same. It depends on the situation or what I need to focus on at that time.

제안: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi ada beberapa kesalahan tata bahasa dan pengulangan kata. Perbaiki penggunaan kata kerja seperti "types" menjadi "type" dan hindari pengulangan seperti "helps me helps me". Selain itu, gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat kalimat lebih koheren.

예시: I prefer typing because it is easier and faster than handwriting. I usually type on my phone when I have a lot to write, which helps me save time. Also, typing makes it easier to edit and organize my ideas.

× I do keep it journal sometimes.

✓ I do keep a journal sometimes.

The phrase 'keep it journal' is incorrect because 'it' is the wrong pronoun here and 'journal' needs an article. The correct form is 'keep a journal'. This is an article error (ID 22) and pronoun misuse (ID 12). However, since the instruction is to correct only based on the provided grammar problem types, the closest is 'Verb in the present participle form' (ID 10) due to the verb phrase usage. Suggestion: Use 'keep a journal' to correctly express the action.

× I usually write in my phone because it easier and more convenient than using a notebook.

✓ I usually write on my phone because it is easier and more convenient than using a notebook.

The sentence misses the verb 'is' after 'it', which is necessary for third person singular present tense. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. The main grammar problem is the missing 'is' (ID 2). Suggestion: Always include the verb 'is' after 'it' in such sentences and use correct prepositions.

× I like to write A to do list every day because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

✓ I like to write a to-do list every day because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively.

The phrase 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with hyphens and lowercase. The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a'. This is an article error (ID 22) and singular/plural issue (ID 1) because 'to do list' is a singular noun phrase. Suggestion: Use 'a to-do list' to correctly express the singular noun with proper article and hyphenation.

× Uh, it can be changed, but it's not. Always be 'cause it depends on what.

✓ Uh, it can be changed, but it is not always, because it depends on what.

The sentence has unclear pronoun references and incomplete structure. 'Always be' is incorrect; it should be 'it is not always'. Also, 'cause' should be 'because'. This is an incorrect pronoun use (ID 12) and sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: Use complete sentences with clear pronouns and conjunctions.

× I usually types on my phone when I have alot of things to write which helps me helps me save time.

✓ I usually type on my phone when I have a lot of things to write, which helps me save time.

The verb 'types' is incorrect for the first person singular subject 'I'; it should be 'type'. Also, 'alot' should be 'a lot'. The phrase 'helps me helps me' is repetitive; one 'helps me' is sufficient. This is a third person singular issue (ID 2) and article error (ID 22). Suggestion: Use 'I type' and correct spelling and avoid repetition.