Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答不够连贯，语法和词汇使用存在较多错误，导致表达不清晰。建议练习简单句的结构，避免使用错误的词汇，并且尽量使回答更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I write a lot recently because I am preparing for an English exam. I practice by writing essays to improve my skills.

제안: 回答内容不明确且语法混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议先明确表达喜欢写什么，然后给出原因，并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: It depends on the topic. Recently, I have been writing essays for my IELTS exam because I want to improve my writing skills.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但表达稍显笨拙。建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，使表达更自然，同时补充具体例子。

예시: Yes, after the exam, I plan to write about more everyday topics and explore different perspectives to improve my writing.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但语法和词汇使用不准确。建议使用正确的时态和词形变化，并使句子更流畅。

예시: I prefer typing on a computer because my handwriting is not very good. Typing helps me write more efficiently.

× Ashley recently I write a lot because I also extermination so especially I need to practice my writing section, so I read write some English essays. During that time.

✓ Recently, I write a lot because I also have an examination, so especially I need to practice my writing section. Therefore, I write some English essays during that time.

句子中时态使用不当，'recently'表示最近，应该用现在完成时或现在时表达习惯动作，且句子结构混乱。建议调整句子结构，使表达更清晰。

× Ashley recently I write a lot because I also extermination so especially I need to practice my writing section, so I read write some English essays. During that time.

✓ Recently, I write a lot because I also have an examination, so especially I need to practice my writing section. Therefore, I write some English essays during that time.

原句中'extermination'用词错误，应为'examination'，且'During that time'位置不当，建议调整以符合英语习惯。

× It depends. Stations and. I I'm not are people in front of writing so recently I'm I'm I'm writing for my iOS examination, so. I I will write depends totally different depends the questions.

✓ It depends. I am not a person who writes often, so recently I am writing for my iOS examination. I will write depending on the different questions.

句子结构混乱，存在断句错误和多余词汇，导致表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确主语和谓语。

× It depends. Stations and. I I'm not are people in front of writing so recently I'm I'm I'm writing for my iOS examination, so. I I will write depends totally different depends the questions.

✓ It depends. I am not a person who writes often, so recently I am writing for my iOS examination. I will write depending on the different questions.

'depends the questions'用法错误，正确应为'depending on the questions'，需要使用介词'on'。

× Yeah, of course, after the examination, I will choose some more natural and common topics for me to make A to write some essays, and maybe I will choose some specific perspectives.

✓ Yeah, of course, after the examination, I will choose some more natural and common topics to write some essays, and maybe I will choose some specific perspectives.

句中'make A to write'结构错误，应直接使用不定式'to write'，去掉多余的'make A'。

× I'm not a good person good add handwriting so I prefer to type at the computer and keying everything I want to say.

✓ I'm not good at handwriting, so I prefer to type on the computer and type everything I want to say.

'good add handwriting'错误，应为'good at handwriting'，且'keying'用词不当，改为'type'更合适。

× I'm not a good person good add handwriting so I prefer to type at the computer and keying everything I want to say.

✓ I'm not good at handwriting, so I prefer to type on the computer and type everything I want to say.

介词使用错误，'at the computer'应为'on the computer'，符合英语习惯。

× Compared with handwriting, I think. A computer make me more efficient efficiently.

✓ Compared with handwriting, I think a computer makes me more efficient.

'make'应为第三人称单数形式'makes'，'efficiently'是副词，句中应使用形容词'efficient'修饰主语。