Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达不够自然，语法和用词错误较多，且句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用简单清晰的语言表达观点。

예시: No, I don't write a lot. Nowadays, I usually use my phone or computer to take notes instead of writing by hand.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，缺乏具体细节。建议明确说明喜欢写什么，并给出具体原因，使用连词使句子连贯。

예시: I like to write important and memorable things on paper because it helps me remember them better than typing on a computer.

제안: 回答几乎无法理解，缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议先理解问题，直接回答，并用简单句表达观点。

예시: No, I don't think what I write will change. Once I write something, it usually stays the same.

제안: 回答中断多，表达不流畅，语法错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复和犹豫词。

예시: I prefer handwriting when I write because I am not very good at typing and I type slowly.

× In my opinion, I think that's not.

✓ In my opinion, I don't think so.

句中使用了不完整的否定表达，'that's not'不符合英语表达习惯，应使用完整的否定句'I don't think so'。

× I'm not very frequently to write something because due to the digital D relevance, we often use our phone or computer to record something.

✓ I don't write very frequently because, due to digital development, we often use our phone or computer to record things.

'very frequently'作为频率副词，应放在动词前；'due to the digital D relevance'表达不清，应改为'due to digital development'；'to write something'结构不正确，应改为'I don't write very frequently'。

× Such as I often use the my phone to make it.

✓ For example, I often use my phone to do that.

'the my phone'中'the'和'my'不能同时使用，应去掉'the'；'make it'表达不明确，改为'do that'更合适。

× And As for me, I think that I'd like to drive something important thing and very remarkable, forgettable, unforgettable things by writing in the paper, because especially in the form, you make noise in the form and the computer.

✓ As for me, I think I'd like to write down important and very remarkable, unforgettable things on paper, because especially in the form, you make noise on the phone and the computer.

句首不应同时使用'And'和'As'；'drive'用词错误，应为'write down'；'forgettable'与上下文不符，应去掉；'in the form'表达不清，可能指'phone'，应改为'phone'；'make noise in the form and the computer'表达不通顺，应改为'make noise on the phone and the computer'。

× Actually I don't think the thing I'd write my check if. My transmission but is is is that some situation like your paper was a spy or path or your writing paper was was true by your.

✓ Actually, I don't think the things I write would change. But in some situations, like if your paper was a spy or path, or your writing paper was true by you.

原句结构混乱，语义不清，需重组句子使其通顺；'my check if'无意义，改为'would change'；'is is is'重复，应删除；'spy or path'可能是误听，应根据上下文调整。

× Actually, I'd like to use a. Uhm, handing writing when I was compressed or writing task because I'm not very actually I'm not very familiar with typing.

✓ Actually, I'd like to use handwriting when I have a composition or writing task because I'm not very familiar with typing.

'handing writing'应为'handwriting'；'when I was compressed'应为'when I have a composition'；'I'm not very actually I'm not very familiar'重复，应简化为'I'm not very familiar'。

× I type with so slowly compared I drive. RI C5 my hand so I think that.

✓ I type very slowly compared to how I write by hand, so I think that handwriting is better for me.

'I type with so slowly'语法错误，应为'I type very slowly'；'compared I drive'应为'compared to how I write'；'RI C5 my hand'无意义，推测为'write by hand'；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。