Writing— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意时态一致性。可以用更自然的表达方式来描述过去和现在的写作习惯。

예시: Yes, I write quite often. When I was a child, I enjoyed writing a lot, but now I have less free time because I am busy with work and studies.

제안: 回答中表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议明确说明写日记的内容和原因，使用连贯的句子表达。

예시: I like to keep a diary where I record my daily mood and meals because it helps me remember good times and reflect on my experiences.

제안: 回答中语法混乱，表达不连贯。建议用清晰的句子说明兴趣的变化如何影响写作内容，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I think what I write will change because my interests evolve over time, so the topics I write about now are different from those in the past.

제안: 回答中有严重语法和词汇错误，表达不清晰。建议直接表达偏好并说明原因，使用正确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: To be honest, I prefer handwriting because it feels more personal and satisfying when I finish writing something by hand.

× When I was a child I like I like writing writing, but nowadays have no free time to write a lot because they basically work and study.

✓ When I was a child, I liked writing, but nowadays I have no free time to write a lot because I basically work and study.

句子中描述过去的动作时，动词应使用过去时态，因此将 'like' 改为 'liked'。另外，主语缺失，'have no free time' 前应加主语 'I'，'they' 应改为 'I'，保持主语一致。

× When I was a child I like I like writing writing, but nowadays have no free time to write a lot because they basically work and study.

✓ When I was a child, I liked writing, but nowadays I have no free time to write a lot because I basically work and study.

句中 'they' 指代不明且与主语不一致，应改为 'I'，保持主语一致。

× I like to keep a diary including my today mode food.

✓ I like to keep a diary including my mood and food today.

原句中 'today mode food' 词序和用词不当，应调整为 'my mood and food today'，使表达更清晰。

× And the shadow be 'cause if I write them I can look back into my old good. Days.

✓ And the reason is that if I write them, I can look back on my good old days.

原句结构混乱，'the shadow be 'cause' 不合语法，应改为 'the reason is that'，并调整后半句使其通顺。

× Yes, I do, because the things I write early based on my interests and my interests, always. Change and different from the past so I think the things I. Rights would change.

✓ Yes, I do, because the things I wrote earlier were based on my interests, and my interests always change and are different from the past, so I think the things I write will change.

描述过去的动作应使用过去时 'wrote'，并且句子中断续不完整，需调整句子结构使其完整通顺。

× Yes, I do, because the things I write early based on my interests and my interests, always. Change and different from the past so I think the things I. Rights would change.

✓ Yes, I do, because the things I wrote earlier were based on my interests, and my interests always change and are different from the past, so I think the things I write will change.

'I. Rights' 是错误拼写，应为 'I write'，且句子中断续不完整，需修正。

× To be honest I prefer her writing be called Heather writing.

✓ To be honest, I prefer handwriting, also called 'Heather writing'.

'her writing' 用词不当，应为 'handwriting'，且 'Heather writing' 可能是误听或误写，需根据上下文调整。

× The make a form it more real and when I look at the networks I finish writing I have Austins or achievements.

✓ It makes it feel more real, and when I look at the notes after finishing writing, I have a sense of accomplishment.

原句结构混乱，语义不清，需重组句子使其表达清晰且符合语法。