Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason. Use correct article and singular/plural forms (e.g., “the sunflower” or “sunflowers”).

예시: Yes, I do. I especially love sunflowers because their bright yellow petals look cheerful and they always lift my mood.

제안: Organize the answer with a topic sentence and a supporting detail. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles, and plural forms). Replace filler words and unclear vocabulary. Give one clear example of what they buy.

예시: Yes. My friend loves flowers; she often buys sunflowers and lilies because she likes their strong colours and pleasant scent.

제안: Give a direct answer and a specific reason. Use cohesive linking words and correct sentence structure. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear phrases like “no more support.” Mention where you can see flowers if relevant.

예시: Not really. I live in a condominium with little garden space, so there aren’t many flowers nearby; however, I can still see plants in the lobby and on balconies.

제안: Answer directly, then explain with specific frequency and reason. Avoid repetition and finish the thought. Use correct adverbs (e.g., “sometimes”) and verb forms.

예시: Not usually. I don’t take photos of flowers every day, but sometimes when I see a particularly beautiful bloom I’ll take a picture to remember it.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence and one or two concrete examples of occasions. Use correct plural and prepositions (e.g., “send flowers to”). Avoid fillers.

예시: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions, such as birthdays and graduations. For example, friends and family commonly give bouquets to graduates to celebrate their achievement.

× Yes, I do. I especially I love sunflower because it's cheerful and beautiful.

✓ Yes, I do. I especially love sunflowers because they are cheerful and beautiful.

The sentence has extra 'I' and incorrect noun/adjective forms. 'Especially I love' is redundant; use 'I especially love' or 'Especially, I love'. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' when speaking generally. 'It's' refers to singular; use 'they are' to agree with plural. Suggestion: remove the extra 'I', pluralize the noun, and use correct subject-verb agreement (they are).

× Well actually my friend she really love flower uh such as lost sunflower and Lily she usually buys.

✓ Well, actually my friend really loves flowers; for example, dried sunflowers and lilies that she usually buys.

Multiple errors: duplicate subject 'my friend she' should be 'my friend' and verb must agree with third person singular: 'loves' not 'love'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' when general, and example items need plural and correct names: 'sunflowers' and 'lilies'. 'Lost sunflower' seems intended as 'dried sunflower' or 'dried sunflowers'; I used 'dried sunflowers'. Rephrase for clarity and punctuation. Suggestion: remove duplicate subject, use third-person singular verb, pluralize nouns when general, and clarify item names.

× Uh, not much because I live in condominium it. No more support for park or flower, but however when I want.

✓ Uh, not many, because I live in a condominium. There is not much space for a park or flowers, so I can't when I want.

Errors: 'not much' compares countable 'flowers' so use 'not many'. 'I live in condominium it' is incorrect word order and missing article: 'I live in a condominium'. 'No more support for park or flower' is unclear; corrected to 'There is not much space for a park or flowers' using 'there is' construction. 'but however when I want' is incomplete; rephrased to 'so I can't when I want' or better 'so I can't plant them when I want'. Suggestion: use appropriate articles, correct word order, use 'there is' for existence, and ensure clauses are complete.

× No, actually I don't take a photo with flower in daily daily life some but sometime I see beautiful flower. I prefer take a photo but.

✓ No, actually I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life, but sometimes I see beautiful flowers and prefer to take a photo.

Errors: 'take a photo with flower' should be 'take photos of flowers' (use 'of' not 'with' and plural for habitual action). 'daily daily life' is redundant; use 'daily life'. 'sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I prefer take a photo' needs infinitive after 'prefer': 'prefer to take a photo'. Also pluralize 'flowers' when general. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'of', use plural for habitual actions, use 'sometimes', and use 'prefer to + verb' structure.

× Yes, I think so. Especially special occasion uh such as birthday and graduation. Graduation people usually send flower for.

✓ Yes, I think so, especially on special occasions such as birthdays and graduations. For graduations people usually send flowers.

Errors: missing preposition 'on' before 'special occasions', 'occasion' should be plural when general, 'birthday' and 'graduation' should be plural for general statements. 'Graduation people usually send flower for' has wrong word order and missing article and plural: corrected to 'For graduations people usually send flowers' or 'People usually send flowers for graduations'. Suggestion: include necessary prepositions, pluralize general nouns, and place words in correct order; use plural 'flowers' for countable items.