Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to add one specific reason. For example, say you like flowers, give one clear reason and a short example. Aim for 2–3 sentences and correct noun/verb agreement and articles.

예시: Yes, I do love flowers. They brighten my day because their colours and scent instantly lift my mood, for example, seeing a bunch of tulips always cheers me up.

제안: Answer directly and give a specific person or group, then explain why they like flowers with clear vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases and filler; use linking words like "for example" or "because". Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, many of my friends love flowers. For example, my neighbour grows roses because she enjoys their fragrance and the variety of colours they bring to her garden.

제안: Give a direct, grammatical statement about your area, follow with one supporting detail and use linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and articles. Keep it concise and specific (mention parks, gardens, or streets).

예시: Not really. There are many trees around my house but few flower beds, although the local park has some seasonal displays in spring.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific details about when and why you photograph flowers. Correct tense and collocations (e.g., "take photos of flowers", "I take my camera out"). Use linking words like "so" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I go for walks because I enjoy their colours and patterns. For example, last weekend I photographed several wildflowers along the riverbank to practice my close-up shots.

제안: Answer directly then give specific occasions and reasons, using correct vocabulary (e.g., "to show appreciation"), articles and plural forms. Use linking words like "for example" and keep it to 2–3 sentences with clear examples.

예시: Yes, people often send flowers to show appreciation or affection. For example, couples give roses on Valentine’s Day and families send bouquets on Mother’s Day or to thank someone for help.

× To be honest, I really like flower because of flower can really make people happy especially when you look at the flower would always brighten up your day.

✓ To be honest, I really like flowers because flowers can really make people happy; especially when you look at flowers they always brighten up your day.

ID 1: Singular and plural issue. The student used 'flower' (singular) when referring to flowers in general. Use the plural 'flowers' for general statements. Also adjusted word order and verb form for clarity: 'would always brighten' changed to 'always brighten' to match general present meaning.

× I think most of the people like flower because flower is a kind of blend that make people happy.

✓ I think most people like flowers because flowers are a kind of thing that make people happy.

ID 1: Singular and plural issue. 'People' does not need 'the' here; 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally. Also changed 'is a kind of blend' to 'are a kind of thing' to match plural subject and clearer meaning.

× Especially when you look at that, the colourful and the DE and the shape definitely will look make people happy.

✓ Especially when you look at them, the colours and the shape definitely make people happy.

ID 13 and 26: Incorrect use of adjectives/nouns and sentence structure errors. 'That' is vague; use 'them' to refer to flowers. 'The colourful and the DE' is unclear—interpreted as 'colours'. Removed unnecessary verbs 'will look make' and used 'make' for present general truth.

× I don't think that much flower nearby my house.

✓ I don't think there are that many flowers near my house.

ID 1: Singular and plural issue and also 'There be' structure. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' and use 'that many' to quantify. Added 'there are' to form correct existential sentence.

× My area are more tree nearby, not as much as flower nearby.

✓ My area has more trees nearby and not as many flowers.

ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors. 'My area' is singular so use 'has' not 'are'. 'Tree' and 'flower' should be plural when speaking generally. Reordered for natural English.

× I like to capture all the flower when I walk through it.

✓ I like to capture all the flowers when I walk past them.

ID 6 and 8: Present tense and verb+ -ing/form issues. Use plural 'flowers'. 'Walk through it' is unnatural for noticing flowers; 'walk past them' or 'when I walk by' is more natural. Kept present simple 'like' for habit.

× If I walk around, I saw the flower.

✓ If I walk around, I see the flowers.

ID 5: Past tense issue. The conditional 'If I walk around' uses present simple to express habitual action, so follow with present simple 'I see', not past 'saw'. Also use plural 'flowers'.

× Very nice.

✓ They are very nice.

ID 26: Sentence structure errors. 'Very nice' is a fragment; add a subject and verb to make a complete sentence: 'They are very nice.' refers to the flowers.

× I would recommend immediately take my photo camera out and take a picture.

✓ I would immediately take my camera out and take a picture.

ID 4 and 26: Modal verb usage and sentence structure. 'Recommend' is not needed with 'I would' here; the intended meaning is a personal reaction, so 'I would immediately take my camera out' is correct. 'Photo camera' is redundant; use 'camera'.

× Actually, yes, sending flower to someone is a kind of appreciate or a kind of a thankful to someone who help us.

✓ Actually, yes, sending flowers to someone is a way to show appreciation or thank someone who helps us.

ID 1 and 22: Singular/plural and article errors. Use plural 'flowers' for general meaning. 'A kind of appreciate' is incorrect; use 'a way to show appreciation' or 'to thank someone'. Corrected 'help' to 'helps' to agree with 'someone'.

× Or maybe on Valentine Day people like couple, usually they send flower to their loved one or Mother's Day, Father's Day sometimes also, yeah, flower is a kind of thing to like.

✓ Or maybe on Valentine's Day couples usually send flowers to their loved ones, and on Mother's Day or Father's Day sometimes too. Yes, flowers are a common gift.

ID 22 and 1: Article errors and singular/plural issues. Use possessive form 'Valentine's Day', plural 'couples', plural 'flowers', and plural 'loved ones'. Rephrased for natural English and corrected agreement.