Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'president of Flower'. Try to use clear and correct expressions and avoid confusing words. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they bring happiness and a bright smile to my face whenever I see them.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and has grammatical mistakes like 'get flowers on their bodies'. Use precise vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, many people around me love flowers. My loved ones often give me flowers as gifts on special occasions.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mother loves gardening. Therefore, we have a variety of flowers in our garden.

제안: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrases like 'makes me a lot happy'. Use correct grammar and linking words to improve fluency.

예시: To be honest, I often take photos of flowers because I love capturing their beauty. Whenever I feel stressed, I look at these pictures, which makes me very happy.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing like 'it makes our love one more special'. Use correct verb tenses and clearer expressions.

예시: Yes, nowadays it is common to give flowers to loved ones because flowers represent love and make the person feel special.

× Of course I think every girl love flowers because the president of Flower makes us happy and whenever we look at them it bring a bright smile at on my face.

✓ Of course I think every girl loves flowers because the presence of flowers makes us happy and whenever we look at them it brings a bright smile on my face.

The subject 'every girl' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' (third person singular). 'President of Flower' seems to be a typo and should be 'presence of flowers'. Also, 'it bring' should be 'it brings' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'at on my face' is incorrect; 'on my face' is correct.

× Everyone around me loves flowers a lot. Many people like to get flowers on their bodies as a gift and my love ones really give me flower when it was a special occasion.

✓ Everyone around me loves flowers a lot. Many people like to get flowers as gifts and my loved ones really give me flowers on special occasions.

'Love ones' should be 'loved ones' (correct adjective form). 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to multiple items. 'When it was a special occasion' is better expressed as 'on special occasions' to indicate habitual action.

× Yes, my mother is really interested in gardening and she really loves to uh, have flowers around her. So we have different variety of flowers in our garden.

✓ Yes, my mother is really interested in gardening and she really loves to have flowers around her. So we have different varieties of flowers in our garden.

'Different variety' should be 'different varieties' because 'variety' is countable and plural is needed here.

× To be honest, a lot. I really love to capture their beauty in my camera and whenever I feel stress I look at my gallery where I take picture of flowers and it makes me a lot happy.

✓ To be honest, a lot. I really love to capture their beauty with my camera and whenever I feel stressed I look at my gallery where I take pictures of flowers and it makes me very happy.

'Take picture' should be 'take pictures' (plural). 'Feel stress' should be 'feel stressed' (adjective). 'Makes me a lot happy' is incorrect; 'makes me very happy' is correct. Also, 'in my camera' is better as 'with my camera'.

× Yes, nowadays it became common to give flowers to our loved one because flowers represent our love to them and it makes our love one more special.

✓ Yes, nowadays it has become common to give flowers to our loved ones because flowers represent our love to them and it makes our loved ones feel more special.

'Loved one' should be plural 'loved ones' to match context. 'Became' should be 'has become' for present perfect tense. 'Makes our love one more special' is awkward; better to say 'makes our loved ones feel more special'.