Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to use clear and correct grammar and avoid slang like 'OMG'. Also, use correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'I love flowers very much. I always grow them around my house so I can see them every day. They make me feel fresh and calm.'

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. I always grow them around my house so I can enjoy their beauty every day. They make me feel fresh and calm, which helps me relax.

제안: In English (Cambodia), focus on clear sentence structure and correct pronouns. Avoid repetition and use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'Yes, my best friend loves flowers as much as I do. I think flowers represent truth, beauty, and confidence, so seeing them makes us feel calm.'

예시: Yes, my best friend loves flowers as much as I do. I believe flowers represent truth, beauty, and confidence, so when we see them, we feel calm and peaceful.

제안: In English (Cambodia), try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and unclear phrases. Use correct verbs and sentence structure. For example, say 'There were not many flowers before, but now there are more because I grow many at home. I want to see them every day to feel relaxed.'

예시: There were not many flowers where I live before, but now there are more because I grow many at home. Seeing them every day helps me feel relaxed.

제안: In English (Cambodia), use clear and simple sentences. Avoid confusing phrases and repeat ideas clearly. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers wherever I go. I keep these photos to remember their beauty.'

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers wherever I go. I keep these photos on my phone to remember their beauty whenever I want.

제안: In English (Cambodia), avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and link ideas logically. For example, say 'No, people do not often send flowers, but sometimes they do to express love. Flowers represent love, so sending them shows affection.'

예시: No, people in my country do not often send flowers, but sometimes they do to express love. Flowers represent love, so sending them is a way to show affection.

× I always grow it in or off or glow it around my house because I can see it every day.

✓ I always grow it in or off or grow it around my house because I can see it every day.

The word 'glow' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'grow' in the present tense to match the intended meaning. 'Glow' is a different verb and does not fit the context.

× It make me feel fresh and calmness for more.

✓ It makes me feel fresh and calmness more.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'calmness for more' is awkward; 'calmness more' is clearer.

× It's made me feel beautiful.

✓ It makes me feel beautiful.

The present perfect 'It's made' is incorrect here because the sentence refers to a general feeling, so the simple present 'It makes' is appropriate.

× she love flowers so much as my me.

✓ she loves flowers as much as me.

The subject 'she' requires the verb 'loves' with an 's' for third person singular. Also, 'as my me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'as much as me'.

× I call her best friends,

✓ I call her my best friend,

The pronoun 'her' needs a possessive adjective 'my' to indicate the relationship, and 'friends' should be singular 'friend' to match the context.

× she love flowers so much as my me.

✓ she loves flowers as much as I do.

The phrase 'as my me' is incorrect; the correct comparative phrase is 'as much as I do' to compare actions properly.

× maybe flower is represented to the truth, beautiful and confident

✓ maybe flowers represent truth, beauty, and confidence

The phrase 'represented to' is incorrect; the verb 'represent' does not require 'to'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' and adjectives should be nouns for clarity.

× so when we see the flower we feel calmness.

✓ so when we see flowers we feel calm.

'The flower' is too specific; 'flowers' is more general. Also, 'feel calmness' is awkward; 'feel calm' is the correct expression.

× Then not much umm it but but but now it has more than the past because I glow it a lot in my home because I want to see it every day, to make me feel relaxed every day.

✓ There are not many flowers, but now there are more than in the past because I grow a lot at my home since I want to see them every day to feel relaxed.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correct sentence structure and subject-verb agreement improve clarity. 'Glow' is corrected to 'grow', and 'it' changed to 'them' to refer to flowers.

× So I should live in there is no much more.

✓ So I should live there where there are more flowers.

The phrase 'live in there is no much more' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'live there' and the sentence should express the idea of living where there are more flowers.

× I always take a lot of flower in my photo everywhere, every when not where.

✓ I always take a lot of photos of flowers everywhere, anytime.

'A lot of flower' should be 'a lot of photos of flowers' to be grammatically correct. 'Every when not where' is incorrect; 'anytime' fits better.

× When I go to when I see the flower it always take a photo to my phone because I want to take it as a memory to see it when I want to see it when I.

✓ Whenever I see flowers, I always take photos with my phone because I want to keep them as memories to look at whenever I want.

The original sentence is confusing and incomplete. Correct sentence structure and verb forms clarify the meaning.

× No, that's not but sometime, but sometimes they send flowers to other to bring love to other.

✓ No, not often, but sometimes they send flowers to others to express love.

The phrase 'that's not but sometime' is incorrect. Using 'not often' and 'sometimes' clarifies frequency. 'To bring love to other' is corrected to 'to express love' for natural usage.

× Because I feel no flower is represented to love.

✓ Because I feel flowers represent love.

'No flower is represented to love' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'flowers represent love' without 'no' and 'to'.

× So when they want to spend to to send love to other they always send the flower.

✓ So when they want to send love to others, they always send flowers.

'Spend to to send' is incorrect; 'send' is the correct verb. 'Other' should be plural 'others'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers'.