Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ như 'its beautiful and delicacy' nên là 'their beauty and delicacy'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy chú ý đến việc sử dụng đại từ và động từ phù hợp.

예시: Yes, I really love flowers because of their beauty and delicacy. They not only enhance the aesthetics of our surroundings but also have the power to lift my mood.

제안: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'My mother's is' nên là 'My mother is'. Từ 'spicy' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này, có thể bạn muốn nói 'species' hoặc 'varieties'. Hãy tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác và nói rõ ràng hơn.

예시: My mother is an avid flower lover. She spends hours gardening and carefully choosing different species to ensure the garden looks colorful.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều từ thừa như 'people' lặp lại. Câu 'how this decorated' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

예시: Yes, many people in my neighborhood are interested in planting flowers. Therefore, it is common to see houses decorated with flower pots.

제안: Bạn đã sử dụng từ 'scattering' không đúng nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói 'taking photos'. Ngoài ra, câu 'a flower that look' cần sửa thành 'a flower that looks'. Hãy chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác hơn.

예시: Occasionally, yes. If I come across a flower that looks particularly striking or unusual, I usually cannot resist taking a photo of it on my phone. It's a simple way to preserve beauty.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng danh từ số nhiều 'flowers' thay vì 'it'. Từ 'resting' không phù hợp, có thể bạn muốn nói 'weddings'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'express, express'.

예시: Yes, in my country, flowers are a symbol of affection and respect. People often give flowers on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or to express condolences.

× Yes, I really like flowers because of its beautiful and delicacy.

✓ Yes, I really like flowers because of their beauty and delicacy.

The pronoun 'its' is singular and does not agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. The correct pronoun should be 'their' to match the plural subject. Also, 'beautiful' should be changed to the noun form 'beauty' to parallel 'delicacy'.

× It's it's not only a aesthetic value to our surroundings but have but also have power lift my mood.

✓ It not only has an aesthetic value to our surroundings but also has the power to lift my mood.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'It's it's' is redundant; 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound; 'have but also have' is incorrect verb form and repetition; 'power lift' needs 'the power to lift' for correct meaning and grammar.

× My mother's is a avid flower lover, uh, she spent, she spends hours gardening and carefully choosing different spicy to make sure that looks, uh, colorful.

✓ My mother is an avid flower lover; she spends hours gardening and carefully choosing different species to make sure that it looks colorful.

'Mother's' is possessive and incorrect here; should be 'mother'. 'A' should be 'an' before vowel sound. 'Spicy' is a wrong word; correct word is 'species'. 'That looks' needs 'it' as subject. Verb tense corrected to present habitual 'spends'.

× Uh, yes, people around in my neighborhood, people, uh, are quite in, uh, interested in planting.

✓ Uh, yes, people around my neighborhood are quite interested in planting.

The preposition 'around in' is incorrect; 'around' alone suffices. Also, 'people' is repeated unnecessarily. The phrase 'quite in interested' is incorrect; correct is 'quite interested in'.

× So it is common to see how this decorated with, umm, flower pots.

✓ So it is common to see how this area is decorated with flower pots.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'decorated'; adding 'area is' corrects the sentence structure. 'How this decorated' is incomplete and ungrammatical.

× If I come across a flower that look, uh, particularly striking or unusual, I usually cannot resist scattering it on my phone.

✓ If I come across a flower that looks particularly striking or unusual, I usually cannot resist snapping it on my phone.

The verb 'look' should be 'looks' to agree with singular subject 'a flower'. Also, 'scattering it on my phone' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'snapping' (taking a photo).

× Yes, in my country, flowers are the symbol of affection and respect, so people give it to uh in special occasions like birthdays, resting or even express, express uh, condolence.

✓ Yes, in my country, flowers are a symbol of affection and respect, so people give them on special occasions like birthdays, weddings, or even to express condolence.

'It' is singular and does not agree with plural 'flowers'; should be 'them'. 'In special occasions' should be 'on special occasions'. 'Resting' is incorrect; likely intended 'weddings'. Repetition of 'express' removed. Added 'to' before 'express condolence' for correct grammar.