Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to use correct singular and plural forms and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by specific supporting details using linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. In fact, they are very important to me because my family shares the same passion. We have a garden full of various types of flowers, especially many rose bushes, which I find very beautiful.

제안: Avoid repetition and incorrect plural forms. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples without vague terms like 'etcetera'.

예시: Yes, most of my family members love flowers. For example, we have a garden filled with different varieties such as roses and sunflowers, which we all enjoy tending to.

제안: Work on subject-verb agreement and clarity. Use linking words to explain your ideas clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'beautiful sense of those'.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live. My home is in a lovely village surrounded by various flowers, which symbolize different meanings and bring a pleasant atmosphere to the area.

제안: Good use of linking words like 'moreover'. To improve, avoid repeating phrases like 'in my daily life' and try to be more concise and natural in expression.

예시: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of flowers every day. I often send these pictures to my mother, who loves them, and her interest inspires me to keep capturing beautiful shots.

제안: Complete your sentences fully and avoid grammatical errors like subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples of occasions when flowers are sent.

예시: In India, flowers have important cultural meanings. Many people offer flowers to deities as a sign of gratitude. Additionally, flowers are often sent to friends and family during festivals and special occasions.

× Definitely, I love flowers, in fact flower is the most significant thing in my life because my whole family loves flowers and we had a garden with the fulls of different types of flowers in it, specifically lot flour roses.

✓ Definitely, I love flowers, in fact flowers are the most significant things in my life because my whole family loves flowers and we have a garden full of different types of flowers in it, specifically lots of flour roses.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context. 'Fulls' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'full of'. 'Lot flour roses' seems to be a mishearing or typo; it should be 'lots of flowers, roses'. Also, 'had' should be 'have' to indicate present possession. These corrections fix singular/plural mismatches and verb tense.

× Of course my family, most of my family members, loves flower. We also had a garden with the full fulls of different varieties of flowers in it, such as like roses, sunflowers and etcetera.

✓ Of course my family, most of my family members, love flowers. We also have a garden full of different varieties of flowers in it, such as roses, sunflowers, etc.

'Family members' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' not 'loves'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Had' should be 'have' for present tense. 'Full fulls' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'full of'. 'Such as like' is redundant; use 'such as' or 'like' alone. 'Etcetera' is better abbreviated as 'etc.' These corrections address singular/plural issues and improve phrasing.

× Definitely. My home is situated in the middle of a beautiful village surrounded by different kinds of flowers. Those flowers signifies a lot of beautiful meanings on it and it's also provide us a beautiful sense of those.

✓ Definitely. My home is situated in the middle of a beautiful village surrounded by different kinds of flowers. Those flowers signify a lot of beautiful meanings and they also provide us with a beautiful sense of them.

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'signify' not 'signifies'. 'It's' (it is) should be 'they' to refer to plural 'flowers'. 'Provide' needs 's' to agree with plural subject 'they' is correct, so 'provide' is correct. Also, 'on it' is incorrect; better to say 'and they also provide us with a beautiful sense of them'. These corrections fix subject-verb agreement and preposition use.

× Definitely, I love capturing photos of flowers in my daily life. Moreover, I would love to send those pictures to my mother because she's very fond of those beautiful pictures of the flowers and I was inspired by her to take those photos in my daily life.

✓ Definitely, I love capturing photos of flowers in my daily life. Moreover, I love to send those pictures to my mother because she's very fond of those beautiful pictures of flowers and I was inspired by her to take those photos in my daily life.

'Would love to send' implies conditional or future desire; since this is a habitual action, 'love to send' is more appropriate. 'The flowers' is better as 'flowers' without 'the' here. These changes improve modal verb usage and article use.

× In India, flowers hold a significant meaning behind it, specifically cultural meaning. Most of the people will offers the flower to the deities to show the gratitude towards them. Additionally, they will also send those flower to.

✓ In India, flowers hold significant meaning, specifically cultural meaning. Most people offer flowers to the deities to show gratitude towards them. Additionally, they also send those flowers to others.

'Will offers' is incorrect; modal 'will' should be followed by base verb 'offer'. 'The flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match context. 'Most of the people' is better as 'Most people'. 'Send those flower to' is incomplete; should be 'send those flowers to others'. These corrections fix modal verb usage and singular/plural issues.