Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，建议简化句子并注意主谓一致，同时避免重复表达。

예시: I am not very fond of flowers, but I like receiving them because it shows that others care about me, which makes me happy.

제안: 回答内容不连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用简单句表达，注意时态和句子逻辑，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers. When we travel to other countries, she always pays attention to the flowers around us, like in gardens or on the streets, and she can name most of them.

제안: 表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，建议使用正确的句型和连接词，丰富细节描述。

예시: No, there are only a few species of flowers where I live. However, in other countries like Japan and Canada, there are many types of flowers that I cannot even name.

제안: 表达混乱且有语法错误，建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使句子通顺。

예시: No, I usually don't take photos of flowers because the types of flowers around me are always the same, which makes me feel bored.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达不清晰，建议分句表达原因，注意语法和词汇的准确使用。

예시: No, people in Hong Kong don't often send flowers because special flowers like roses are very expensive. Also, the local flowers are not very colorful or special, so people are not very interested in sending them.

× I'm not fond of flowers but I'd like to receive them because it show them loves of the others to me and I would feel happy for their for that doing so.

✓ I'm not fond of flowers but I'd like to receive them because it shows their love for me and I would feel happy because of that.

句中 'it show' 主语是第三人称单数，动词应加 -s 变为 'shows'。'loves of the others' 表达不自然，改为 'their love for me' 更准确。'for their for that doing so' 结构混乱，改为 'because of that' 更通顺。

× Yes, my mom laughed a lot.

✓ Yes, my mom laughs a lot.

此句描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'laughs'，而非过去时 'laughed'。

× She knows many flowers when we when travels to the other countries she always focus on the flowers on the surroundings like in the garden or street she can some most of the flowers she can name it.

✓ She knows many flowers. When we travel to other countries, she always focuses on the flowers in the surroundings, like in the garden or on the street. She can name most of the flowers.

句子结构混乱，需拆分。'when travels' 应为 'when we travel'，主语和动词需一致。'focus on the flowers on the surroundings' 中 'on the surroundings' 应改为 'in the surroundings'。'she can some most of the flowers she can name it' 语法错误，改为 'She can name most of the flowers'。

× No, in my living place it's always a few species of flowers, not so much type.

✓ No, in my living place there are always a few species of flowers, not so many types.

'a few species' 是复数，谓语应用复数 'are'。'not so much type' 中 'type' 应为复数 'types'，且 'much' 用于不可数名词，复数名词用 'many'。

× And I found that in the other country, like in Japan, there like in Canada, there are many type of flowers that I cannot name.

✓ And I found that in other countries, like Japan and Canada, there are many types of flowers that I cannot name.

'there like in Canada' 结构错误，应去掉 'like in Canada' 或改为 'like Japan and Canada'。'many type' 中 'type' 应为复数 'types'。

× No, actually I don't notice them because every day the those species kind of flowers, they're not so much floral tea making me feel is so boring and dull so I don't use to take photo.

✓ No, actually I don't notice them because every day those species of flowers are not very colorful, making me feel bored and dull, so I don't usually take photos.

'the those' 重复，去掉 'the'。'species kind of flowers' 应为 'species of flowers'。'not so much floral tea' 语义不明，改为 'not very colorful'。'making me feel is so boring' 语法错误，改为 'making me feel bored'。'I don't use to take photo' 应为 'I don't usually take photos'。

× No, because in Hong Kong the special flowers like roses are so expensive to buy and the surrounding those flowers is not very colorful or special that people won't have interest.

✓ No, because in Hong Kong special flowers like roses are so expensive to buy, and the surrounding flowers are not very colorful or special, so people are not interested.

'the special flowers' 中 'the' 可去掉。'the surrounding those flowers is' 主谓不一致，改为 'the surrounding flowers are'。'people won't have interest' 应为 'people are not interested'。