Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“the color of flowers are”应为“the colors of flowers are”。建议注意主谓一致，避免口语化的“you know”，并且回答可以更简洁有效。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they have pleasant scents and vibrant colors. However, I am not interested in planting them as I find it quite tiring.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“one of the person”应为“one of the people”，“love the flower”应为“loves flowers”。建议加强语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, one of the people I know who loves flowers is my mom. She spends a lot of time planting them because it gives her a sense of achievement and helps her stay in a good mood.

제안: 回答中有语法和用词错误，如“Most plant”应为“Most plants”，“saw some admire some kind of flowers”表达不清。建议注意语法和表达的准确性，避免重复和不连贯。

예시: Actually, there are not many flowers near where I live. Most of the plants around my home are trees, so it feels more like a forest, making it hard to see or admire different kinds of flowers.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“when I walking”应为“when I am walking”，“have a match of the flowers”表达不清。建议简化表达，注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

예시: No, I rarely take photos of flowers because I usually don't notice them when I am walking outside. However, if I see some particularly beautiful flowers, I take photos to remember them.

제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯且重复，如“send the send a flower”。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, people often send flowers to others, especially to express love, such as a boy giving flowers to a girl to show his feelings.

× the color of flowers are mostly very beautiful

✓ the color of flowers is mostly very beautiful

主语是单数名词短语“the color”，谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。颜色是单数，不能用复数动词。

× one of the person I know love the flower very much is my mom

✓ one of the people I know loves flowers very much is my mom

“one of the”后面应接复数名词“people”，动词应与主语“one”一致用单数“loves”，且“flower”应为复数“flowers”。

× she always spend a lot of time on planting flowers

✓ she always spends a lot of time planting flowers

主语是第三人称单数“she”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“spends”。

× Once I ask her about why you're so interested in planting flowers

✓ Once I asked her why she was so interested in planting flowers

描述过去发生的动作，动词应使用过去时“asked”，且间接引语中时态应相应变化。

× she said it brings her a feeling of achievement and also keep her in a good mood

✓ she said it brings her a feeling of achievement and also keeps her in a good mood

主语是第三人称单数“it”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“keeps”。

× Actually there is not a lot of flowers near where I live

✓ Actually there are not a lot of flowers near where I live

“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Most plant near my home is just the trees

✓ Most plants near my home are just trees

“Most”后应接复数名词“plants”，谓语动词用复数“are”，且“the trees”改为复数“trees”。

× it's hard for me to saw some admire some kind of flowers

✓ it's hard for me to see and admire some kinds of flowers

“saw”是过去式，句中应使用动词原形“see”；“some kind of flowers”应改为复数形式“some kinds of flowers”。

× I even don't notice them when I walking outside

✓ I don't even notice them when I walk outside

否定句中助动词“do”后动词用原形，“walking”应改为“walk”。

× I will not put too much attention on flowers

✓ I will not pay too much attention to flowers

“put attention on”用法错误，应使用固定搭配“pay attention to”。

× so there is no need for me to have a match of the flowers

✓ so there is no need for me to take photos of the flowers

“have a match of”用法错误，应表达“拍照”用“take photos of”。

× if I see some particularly beautiful flowers, I will take a photo to remember

✓ if I see some particularly beautiful flowers, I will take photos to remember

“photos”用复数更符合习惯表达，表示多张照片。

× one of the person I know love the flower very much is my mom

✓ one of the people I know loves flowers very much is my mom

“one of the”后应接复数名词“people”，动词应与主语“one”一致用单数“loves”，且“flower”应为复数“flowers”。

× Once I ask her about why you're so interested in planting flowers

✓ Once I asked her why she was so interested in planting flowers

间接引语中人称代词应与主语一致，不能用“you”，应改为“she”。

× you will send the send a flower is the best way to show your feeling and emotion

✓ you will send a flower; it is the best way to show your feelings and emotions

句子结构混乱，应拆分为两句，且“feeling”和“emotion”应用复数形式。