Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“flower”应为复数形式“flowers”，“the flower them”表达不清晰。建议注意名词单复数和代词的正确使用，避免语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Absolutely, I love flowers because they enhance my mood. I always place a bunch of fresh flowers in my living room to enjoy their pleasant fragrance.

제안: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清，如“the the fragrance”，“it sound so”，“put a bunch of flower in near her bed”。建议加强句子结构的准确性，使用正确的时态和介词，使表达更清晰。

예시: Well, my grandmother comes to mind first. She believes that the fragrance of flowers helps her sleep well, so she always places a bunch of flowers near her bed.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“always walking”，“at in the morning”，“enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listening”。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用，避免重复表达，使句子更连贯。

예시: Absolutely, there are many flowers where I live. For example, Central Park near my home is full of flowers. I usually walk there in the morning to enjoy the fragrance, sunshine, and the sound of birds chirping.

제안: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，如“take photo of the flowers”，“sweet old things”，“it has a sentiment it has for me”，“sentimental volume”。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰表达情感和原因。

예시: Yes, of course. Taking photos of flowers helps me remember beautiful memories. They hold sentimental value for me and make me feel nostalgic.

제안: 回答中有不完整和混乱的表达，如“Especially the **** say it's a it's, it has, it's a label of good, good luck”，“birthday guys”。建议避免使用模糊或错误的词汇，准确表达文化习俗和具体细节。

예시: Yes, absolutely. In my country, flowers are often given as symbols of good luck. For example, people usually send a bunch of jasmine flowers to friends on their birthdays to express sincere wishes.

× I think flower is a good mood enhancer.

✓ I think flowers are good mood enhancers.

这里flower应该用复数形式flowers，因为指的是花的总体概念，且后面用的是复数名词。动词也要与复数主语一致，使用are。

× I always put a bunch of flowers in my living room so I can enjoy the fragrance of the flower them.

✓ I always put a bunch of flowers in my living room so I can enjoy their fragrance.

这里的the flower them结构不正确，应该用复数代词their来指代flowers，且去掉多余的the。

× She thinks the the fragrance of flowers it sound so it can help her to have a sound sleep.

✓ She thinks the fragrance of flowers sounds good and can help her have a sound sleep.

fragrance是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式sounds。句子中it重复且多余，应删除。

× So she always put a bunch of flower in near her bed.

✓ So she always puts a bunch of flowers near her bed.

flower应为复数flowers，表示一束花。动词put应加第三人称单数-s，变为puts。介词in与near重复，应去掉in。

× There are lots of flowers in the Central Park next to my home and I always walking in the park at in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listening to the birds chirping.

✓ There are lots of flowers in Central Park next to my home and I always walk in the park in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listen to the birds chirping.

always后面应接动词原形walk，而不是walking。in the morning中多了一个at，应去掉。listen与enjoy并列，保持动词原形。

× There are lots of flowers in the Central Park next to my home and I always walking in the park at in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listening to the birds chirping.

✓ There are lots of flowers in Central Park next to my home and I always walk in the park in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listen to the birds chirping.

介词短语中，in the morning前不应有at，应该直接用in the morning。

× I always walking in the park at in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listening to the birds chirping.

✓ I always walk in the park in the morning so I can enjoy the fragrance of flowers, enjoy the sunshine and listen to the birds chirping.

always后面应接动词原形walk，而不是动名词walking。并列动词listen也应使用原形。

× I think take photo of the flowers can help me to remember the sweet old things.

✓ I think taking photos of the flowers can help me remember the sweet old things.

take photo应改为动名词taking photos，表示动作。photo应为复数photos，表示多张照片。remember后面不需要to。

× I think take photo of the flowers can help me to remember the sweet old things.

✓ I think taking photos of the flowers can help me remember the sweet old things.

photo前应加复数形式photos，表示泛指多张照片。

× And it has a sentiment it has for me.

✓ And it has a sentiment for me.

句中it重复，造成语法错误，应删除多余的it。

× It has a sentimental volume.

✓ It has sentimental value.

volume（音量）用法不当，应改为value（价值）表达情感价值。

× Especially the **** say it's a it's, it has, it's a label of good, good luck.

✓ Especially on the **** day, it's a label of good luck.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的it和has，补充介词on和day使句子完整通顺。

× So people always send a bunch of Jasmine to the birthday guys to express their sincere wishes.

✓ So people always send a bunch of jasmine flowers to the birthday guys to express their sincere wishes.

Jasmine应为不可数名词jasmine flowers或jasmine，且bunch后面应接复数名词flowers。