Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“they're beautiful colors give me a relaxing and happy feelings”应改为“their beautiful colors give me relaxing and happy feelings”。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和语法错误，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. I especially like fresh red roses because their beautiful colors make me feel relaxed and happy. Flowers always brighten my day and create a pleasant atmosphere around me.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“She very like the red rose”应为“She really likes red roses”，以及“She become very touched and happy”应为“She becomes very touched and happy”。建议注意动词时态和搭配，表达更准确。

예시: Yes, I know someone who loves flowers, especially my mother. She really likes red roses. Every year on Mother's Day, I give her a beautiful rose, and she becomes very touched and happy.

제안: 回答中存在重复和表达不完整的问题，如“fresh rose, rose flowers”重复，且最后一句不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇，避免重复，并完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, such as fresh roses and green lilies. My favorite flower is the fresh red rose because I think it symbolizes love and passion.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“if I can the flowers in the”不完整。建议简化句子，确保表达完整且语法正确。

예시: I occasionally take photos of flowers in my daily life. For example, when I go shopping with my friends on a winter day, I like to take pictures of the flowers I see.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“Send Yes”和“They will they will”。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和时态，表达更清晰。

예시: Yes, many people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, they send flowers to their mothers and girlfriends. My boyfriend also gives me many flowers on Valentine's Day.

× I especially like the fresh red rose because they're beautiful colors give me a relaxing and happy feelings.

✓ I especially like the fresh red roses because their beautiful colors give me relaxing and happy feelings.

这里“rose”应使用复数形式“roses”，因为后文指代的是多朵花的颜色；“they're”应为“their”，表示“它们的”；“feelings”前不需要冠词“a”，且“feelings”是复数形式。

× The flowers will brighten my day and, uh, create a pleas pleasant atmosphere around me.

✓ The flowers will brighten my day and create a pleasant atmosphere around me.

“pleas”是拼写错误，应为“pleasant”，表示“愉快的”；“uh”是口语填充词，书面语中应去除。

× She very like the red rose.

✓ She likes the red rose very much.

“very like”用法错误，正确表达应为“likes very much”，且主语是第三人称单数，动词应加-s。

× She become very touched and happy.

✓ She became very touched and happy.

描述过去发生的事情，动词应使用过去式“became”。

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers around me such as fresh rose, rose flowers, greenish Lily flowers and so on.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers around me such as fresh roses, rose flowers, greenish lily flowers and so on.

“rose”应为复数“roses”，表示多朵花；“Lily”作为形容词时应小写。

× My favorite flowers is fresh red rose because I think it symbolize the law and the.

✓ My favorite flower is the fresh red rose because I think it symbolizes love and so on.

“flowers”应为单数“flower”，与谓语“is”一致；“symbolize”应加-s，第三人称单数形式；“law”应为“love”，且句子不完整，补充“and so on”使句意完整。

× I will take photos with flowers occasionally in my daily life.

✓ I occasionally take photos of flowers in my daily life.

描述习惯性动作应使用一般现在时，而非将来时。

× Especially when I go to shopping with my friends in winter day if I can the flowers in the.

✓ Especially when I go shopping with my friends on winter days, if I can see the flowers there.

“go to shopping”应为“go shopping”；“in winter day”应为“on winter days”；句子不完整，补充“see the flowers there”使句意完整。

× Send Yes, there are a lot of people in my country.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of people in my country who send flowers.

句子结构混乱，“Send”位置错误，应调整为“who send flowers”修饰前面的“people”。

× They will they will send flowers to their mother and girlfriend, especially my boyfriend also give me a lot of flowers when the Valentine's Day.

✓ They will send flowers to their mothers and girlfriends; especially, my boyfriend also gives me a lot of flowers on Valentine's Day.

重复“they will”应去除；“mother and girlfriend”应为复数“mothers and girlfriends”；“give”应为第三人称单数“gives”；“when the Valentine's Day”应为“on Valentine's Day”。