Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, keep your answer concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, because they symbolize love. I often send them to my friends and loved ones on Valentine's Day and birthdays to express my feelings and share positive messages.

제안: Your answer has good content but some grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use singular/plural forms correctly and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers, especially sunflowers, because they symbolize peace and happiness. She often plants them and buys dried flowers to create a relaxing and peaceful atmosphere at home.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and repeated words. Try to organize your ideas logically and avoid repetition. Also, check for sentence completeness and coherence.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my mom plants various types like sunflowers and roses in our garden. I find that having flowers around creates a peaceful and relaxing environment for me to study.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but the sentences are confusing and incomplete. Use clearer sentence structures and avoid unnecessary words. Also, explain your reasons more clearly.

예시: Yes, I like taking photos of flowers because they symbolize happiness and peace. I often share these photos on social media to spread positive messages and encourage my friends in their studies.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Make sure to finish your sentences and use correct prepositions and plural forms. Also, avoid repeating similar ideas.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on Valentine's Day and birthdays. On Valentine's Day, roses are popular to express love and positive feelings. For birthdays, flowers are sent to friends and family as a symbol of good wishes.

× Yes, I love flowers so much especially for rose because it symbolize the message of love.

✓ Yes, I love flowers so much especially roses because they symbolize the message of love.

The word 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match the plural subject 'flowers'. Also, the verb 'symbolize' should agree with the plural subject 'roses', so 'they symbolize' is correct.

× I usually send the flowers to my friends and lovers especially for Valentine's Day and birthday because it expresses my feelings and positive message to them which build a strong.

✓ I usually send flowers to my friends and lovers especially on Valentine's Day and birthdays because it expresses my feelings and positive messages to them which build a strong bond.

The preposition 'for' should be 'on' when referring to days like 'Valentine's Day' and 'birthdays'. Also, 'birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to generalize. The sentence was incomplete; 'which build a strong' is corrected to 'which build a strong bond' for clarity.

× Yes, my mom loves flowers so much especially for sunflowers because it symbolize the message of peaceful and happiness.

✓ Yes, my mom loves flowers so much especially sunflowers because they symbolize the message of peace and happiness.

'Sunflowers' is plural, so the pronoun should be 'they' instead of 'it'. Also, 'peaceful' is an adjective; the noun 'peace' is correct here.

× She usually plants the flowers and buy some dried flowers at home because she thinks the flowers create and relaxing and peaceful atmosphere for me.

✓ She usually plants flowers and buys some dried flowers at home because she thinks the flowers create a relaxing and peaceful atmosphere for me.

The article 'the' before 'flowers' is unnecessary when speaking generally. 'Buy' should be 'buys' to agree with singular subject 'She'. Also, 'and relaxing and peaceful' should be 'a relaxing and peaceful' to correctly describe the atmosphere.

× Usually my garden has various types of flowers such as sunflower and rose and I think that it helps me to create A and peaceful and relaxing and violent for me to study and.

✓ Usually my garden has various types of flowers such as sunflowers and roses and I think that it helps me to create a peaceful and relaxing environment for me to study.

'Sunflower' and 'rose' should be plural to match 'various types'. The phrase 'A and peaceful and relaxing and violent' is incorrect; corrected to 'a peaceful and relaxing environment'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Yes, I would like to take photos with some flowers because it symbolizes the meaning of happiness and peaceful and I would like to share it in the social media because it's in that case a positive message and I would like to encourage my friends study on studying and.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos with some flowers because they symbolize happiness and peace and I like to share them on social media because they convey a positive message and I want to encourage my friends to study.

'Would like to' is replaced with 'like to' for habitual actions. 'It symbolizes' changed to 'they symbolize' to agree with plural 'flowers'. 'Peaceful' changed to noun 'peace'. 'In the social media' corrected to 'on social media'. The sentence was incomplete and corrected for clarity.

× Yes, especially for Valentine Day and birthday.

✓ Yes, especially for Valentine's Day and birthdays.

'Valentine Day' should be 'Valentine's Day' with possessive apostrophe. 'Birthday' should be plural 'birthdays' to generalize.

× In Valentine's Day, we would like to send the flowers to our lover especially for rose because it helps us to express our feelings and positive message to our buffers.

✓ On Valentine's Day, we like to send flowers to our lovers especially roses because they help us to express our feelings and positive messages to our partners.

Preposition 'In' changed to 'On' for days. 'The flowers' changed to 'flowers' for generalization. 'Lover' pluralized to 'lovers'. 'Especially for rose' changed to 'especially roses'. 'It helps' changed to 'they help' to agree with plural 'roses'. 'Buffers' corrected to 'partners' for correct meaning.

× And in birthday we would like to send to our friends and family because it represents that we.

✓ And on birthdays we like to send them to our friends and family because they represent our feelings.

'In birthday' corrected to 'on birthdays'. 'We would like to send to' corrected to 'we like to send them to' for clarity. 'It represents that we' was incomplete and corrected to 'they represent our feelings'.