Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜欢花的原因，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构有些重复。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免语法错误，并且用连词连接句子，使回答更流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and their fragrance makes me feel happy.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和单复数形式，使用连词连接句子，并且表达更具体。

예시: Yes, my boyfriend loves flowers because they make him feel happy. He often sends me flowers, saying their colors brighten my day.

제안: 回答不完整且有语法和表达错误。建议完整列举花的种类，避免重复词汇，使用连词连接句子，并且表达清晰。

예시: Yes, in my hometown, there are many kinds of flowers, such as roses and lilies. I often see them when I take a walk after dinner.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，避免重复，并且用连词连接句子。

예시: Yes, I enjoy photography, so I often take photos of colorful flowers because they make me feel happy and relaxed.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复词汇，并且表达更具体。

예시: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to friends on their birthdays or when a couple gets married.

× Their flavor are very. Good.

✓ Their flavor is very good.

The subject 'flavor' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, the sentence should be continuous without a period between 'very' and 'Good'.

× my boyfriend likes flower very much

✓ my boyfriend likes flowers very much

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower.

× because he said that flower can make him pleasant

✓ because he said that flowers can make him happy

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer generally. Also, 'pleasant' is an adjective describing feelings caused by something, but here 'happy' is more appropriate to express emotion.

× he said the flowers color can brighten up me.

✓ he said the color of the flowers can brighten me up.

'Flowers color' should be 'color of the flowers' to show possession. Also, 'brighten up me' is incorrect word order; it should be 'brighten me up'.

× there are many kinds of flowers, such as rose and.

✓ there are many kinds of flowers, such as roses and others.

'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'kinds of flowers'. The sentence is incomplete and needs a proper ending.

× And some flowers. When I walk walk after my dinner, I can see the floor.

✓ And some flowers. When I walk after my dinner, I can see the flowers.

'Floor' is incorrect here; it should be 'flowers' to match the context. Also, 'walk walk' is a repetition error.

× I like photograph, so I like to take photos of the flowers because when I see the colorful flowers, my emotion is very light.

✓ I like photography, so I like to take photos of flowers because when I see colorful flowers, my mood is very light.

'Photograph' is a noun meaning a picture; 'photography' is the activity. 'Emotion is very light' is unnatural; 'mood is very light' or 'I feel light-hearted' is better.

× I I will be very happy.

✓ I will be very happy.

Repeated 'I' is a mistake; it should appear only once.

× when or friends friends have a birthday party or a man married to a woman, they will send flowers.

✓ when our friends have a birthday party or a man marries a woman, they will send flowers.

'Or friends friends' is a repetition error; should be 'our friends'. 'A man married to a woman' is incorrect tense and structure; 'a man marries a woman' is correct.