Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you love flowers?
수험생
Umm definitely yes. I love pretty things and gorgeous things. I mean how could how could a person dislike a flowers? It must be because he desires life.
시험관
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
수험생
My mother, my mother is crazy about flowers. Every Monday she will every Monday she will go to the supermarket to buy the new rose for herself and and me to say that congratulations, we have we have a new week.
시험관
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
수험생
Uh, I don't think so because firstly I'm allergic to to some to some kind of flowers with tough smell. Secondly in secondly, in my house I have two cats. Cats will be really cat will be really in danger if there are a lot of flowers which may which may make them vomit.
시험관
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
수험생
Unfortunately, no. If I take, if I take photos, I will keep, I will, I will keep recording of the way that the flower boom and then disappear. I feel that it's, it's a sad thing 'cause it's just like life, we have good moments, then it finish, then everything disappear, I decide.
시험관
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
수험생
I don't, I, I don't. I don't think so as I studied it in France before. French tend to do this well forever. In China we have really heavy stress about about life, so we don't have enough time to take care of each other. Not mention giving flowers.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you love flowers?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答时语言较为口语化且有重复，表达不够简洁自然。建议避免重复表达，使用更自然流畅的句子。
예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and bring joy to life.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有重复且语句不够连贯，建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: My mother loves flowers. Every Monday, she buys a new rose to celebrate the start of a new week.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使逻辑更清楚。
예시: I don't think there are many flowers around because I'm allergic to some with strong smells. Also, I have two cats, and some flowers might harm them.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有较多重复和语法错误，表达不够连贯。建议简化表达，避免重复，并用更自然的句子表达观点。
예시: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because watching them bloom and fade reminds me of how fleeting life is.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
예시: I don't think people in my country often send flowers. When I studied in France, I noticed they do it more often, but in China, people are usually too busy to do so.
문법
× how could a person dislike a flowers?
✓ how could a person dislike flowers?
这里的flowers是复数，前面有不定冠词a，a只能修饰单数名词，故应去掉a。
× buy the new rose for herself and and me to say that congratulations, we have we have a new week.
✓ buy new roses for herself and me to say congratulations, we have a new week.
rose是可数名词，表示多朵花时应使用复数roses，且前面不需要定冠词the。
× Cats will be really cat will be really in danger if there are a lot of flowers which may which may make them vomit.
✓ Cats will be really in danger if there are a lot of flowers which may make them vomit.
句中重复出现cat，且cat为单数，前面主语为复数Cats，需保持一致，故去掉多余的cat。
× I will keep recording of the way that the flower boom and then disappear.
✓ I will keep recording the way that the flower blooms and then disappears.
recording后不需要介词of，且flower是单数，动词应加s变为第三人称单数形式blooms和disappears。
× I don't think so as I studied it in France before.
✓ I don't think so as I studied it in France before.
此句时态正确，无需修改。
× French tend to do this well forever.
✓ French tend to do this well always.
forever通常表示永久，语境中应使用always表示经常，故将forever改为always。
× In China we have really heavy stress about about life, so we don't have enough time to take care of each other. Not mention giving flowers.
✓ In China we have really heavy stress about life, so we don't have enough time to take care of each other. Not to mention giving flowers.
重复出现about，应去掉一个；短语Not mention应为Not to mention，表示“更不用说”。
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