Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法有误，如"I really enjoying"应为"I really enjoy"。此外，"lovely fragments"用词不当，应为"fragrance"。建议注意动词形式和词汇准确性。

예시: Yes, I really enjoy flowers because they add beauty to any environment. With their vibrant colors, delicate shapes, and lovely fragrance, they create a pleasant atmosphere and uplift people's mood.

제안: 回答较好，但开头的"Umm yes"显得不够自然，建议直接回答。可以增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, my mom is really fond of flowers. She enjoys planting potted flowers on our balcony and decorates our house with them every morning. Moreover, she waters them regularly and trims the leaves carefully to keep them healthy.

제안: 回答内容具体且有对比，表达清晰。建议注意冠词使用，如"most of green spaces"应为"most of the green spaces"。

예시: To be honest, there aren't many flowers in my neighborhood because most of the green spaces have been replaced by parking lots due to the increasing demand for parking. However, I still remember that when I was a child, a variety of flowers bloomed in every season.

제안: 回答表达清楚，但句子略显重复，如"usually"出现两次。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers to capture their beauty. Later, whenever I feel frustrated or annoyed, I look at these pictures because they cheer me up and make me feel better.

제안: 回答内容丰富且具体，表达清晰。建议在列举时使用复数形式，如"roses"和"lilies"，并注意句子结构的流畅性。

예시: Yes, in China, people often send flowers to others because many flowers have special meanings, such as roses for love and lilies for purity. Sending flowers is a popular way to express feelings, especially when words are not enough.

× And I really enjoying flowers because they can add beauty to any environment.

✓ And I really enjoy flowers because they can add beauty to any environment.

这里动词 enjoy 应该用原形 enjoy，而不是现在分词 enjoying。动词 enjoy 后面直接接宾语，不需要加 -ing 形式。

× With their vibrant colors, delicate shapes, and lovely fragments, they can create a pleasant atmosphere and uplift people's mood.

✓ With their vibrant colors, delicate shapes, and lovely fragrances, they can create a pleasant atmosphere and uplift people's mood.

单词 fragments（碎片）用错了，正确的词是 fragrances（香味），表示花的香气。

× She waters flowers regularly and trims leaves carefully to keep them healthy.

✓ She waters the flowers regularly and trims the leaves carefully to keep them healthy.

这里需要加定冠词 the 来特指她照顾的那些花和叶子。

× Now, to be honest, there aren't many flowers in my neighborhood because most of green spaces have been replaced by park parking lots due to the increasing demand of parking.

✓ Now, to be honest, there aren't many flowers in my neighborhood because most of the green spaces have been replaced by park parking lots due to the increasing demand for parking.

短语中缺少定冠词 the，应该是 the green spaces；另外，demand 后面搭配介词是 for，而不是 of。

× However, I still remember when I was a child, there were a variety of flowers blooming in each season.

✓ However, I still remember that when I was a child, there were a variety of flowers blooming in each season.

动词 remember 后面接从句时需要用 that 引导，缺少连接词导致句子结构不完整。

× Yes, I usually take photos of flowers because I want to capture their beauty at that time.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of flowers because I want to capture their beauty at that moment.

短语 at that time 通常指过去某个时间点，描述当前动作时用 at that moment 更合适。

× Later, whenever I feel frustrated or annoyed, I usually look at those pictures and these beautiful flowers can cheer me up and make me feel more pleasant.

✓ Later, whenever I feel frustrated or annoyed, I usually look at those pictures and those beautiful flowers can cheer me up and make me feel better.

前后指代不一致，pictures 和 flowers 应该用同一个指示代词 those；另外，形容词 pleasant 用于描述人的感受不准确，应该用形容词 better。

× Yes, in China, people often send flowers to others because many flowers have special meanings like rose for love, lilies for purity, and sending flowers is a popular way to express our feelings, especially when words are not enough.

✓ Yes, in China, people often send flowers to others because many flowers have special meanings, like roses for love, lilies for purity, and sending flowers is a popular way to express our feelings, especially when words are not enough.

名词 rose 应该用复数 roses，因为这里泛指多种玫瑰花；另外，like 前面加逗号更符合书面表达习惯。