Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了对花的喜爱，但有些语法错误和表达不够自然，例如“capturing them with my forms”应为“capturing them with my phone/camera”。建议注意用词准确，避免语法错误，同时回答可以更简洁自然。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and detailed. I enjoy taking photos of them when I see them in parks or on campus. This helps me slow down and appreciate the small moments in daily life.

제안: 回答内容具体且有细节，但有语法错误，如“I think in taking care of flowers”应为“I think taking care of flowers”。建议注意句子结构的正确性，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, my grandma loves flowers. She has a small garden where she grows roses, jasmine, and seasonal flowers. Every morning, she watches and talks to them as if they were her friends. I think taking care of flowers brings her peace and joy.

제안: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如“I live in campus”应为“I live on campus”，“Every blooms”不完整。建议注意语法准确性，避免句子不完整，同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, especially in spring. I live on campus, and the university plants many flowers along the walkways and near the dorms. When they bloom, the air smells sweeter. It's really nice to walk around and see all the colors.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“go on the campus”应为“go on campus”，“close parents”表达不准确。建议简化句子结构，注意词汇搭配，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers when I walk around campus with my friends or family. I like to post these photos on WeChat to share the beautiful moments with my friends.

제안: 回答中有词汇使用错误，如“obsessions”应为“occasions”，“someone's feel special”语法错误。建议注意词汇的准确使用和句子结构的正确性，避免表达模糊。

예시: Yes, people often give flowers as gifts because they are beautiful, meaningful, and suitable for many occasions. Flowers can express feelings like love, sympathy, and respect, making someone feel special.

× I enjoy capturing them with my forms when I see them in parks, on or on campus.

✓ I enjoy capturing them with my phone when I see them in parks or on campus.

这里的 'forms' 应该是 'phone'，可能是拼写错误。'on or on campus' 中重复使用了 'on'，应改为 'or on campus'。建议注意单词拼写和介词的正确使用。

× I think in taking care of flowers really brings her peace and joy.

✓ I think taking care of flowers really brings her peace and joy.

句中 'in taking care' 中的 'in' 是多余的，应去掉。动名词短语作主语时不需要介词。

× I live in campus and the university plans lots of flowers along the walkways and near the dorms during spring.

✓ I live on campus and the university plants lots of flowers along the walkways and near the dorms during spring.

'live in campus' 应为 'live on campus'，因为 'campus' 前通常用介词 'on'。'plans lots of flowers' 中 'plans' 应为 'plants'，因为这里指种植花。

× Every blooms and the air even smells a bit sweeter.

✓ Every flower blooms and the air even smells a bit sweeter.

'Every blooms' 缺少名词，应该是 'Every flower blooms'，'every' 后面需要单数名词。

× I usually take photos when I go on the campus or just walk around with my friends or close parents.

✓ I usually take photos when I go on campus or just walk around with my friends or close relatives.

'go on the campus' 应为 'go on campus'，'campus' 前不加定冠词。'close parents' 用词不当，应该是 'close relatives' 或 'close family members'。

× And that moment I really want to post it and record this nice moment and send it to the WeChat to my friends.

✓ At that moment, I really want to post it, record this nice moment, and send it to my friends on WeChat.

'And that moment' 应为 'At that moment'，表示时间点。'send it to the WeChat to my friends' 结构混乱，应改为 'send it to my friends on WeChat'。

× Yes, people like to give flowers as gifts because they are really beautiful, meaningful and suitable for many obsessions.

✓ Yes, people like to give flowers as gifts because they are really beautiful, meaningful and suitable for many occasions.

'obsessions' 用词错误，应为 'occasions'，表示场合。

× Flowers can express feelings like love, sympathy and respect, and there are simple ways to make someone's feel special.

✓ Flowers can express feelings like love, sympathy and respect, and there are simple ways to make someone feel special.

'someone's' 是所有格，句中应使用宾格 'someone'。