Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains some unnatural phrases and minor errors, such as 'relaxing sea sands' and 'a waste of flower'. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid irrelevant or confusing details. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Yes, I really love flowers. Their bright colors and soft petals always cheer me up. They add beauty to any place, whether it's a garden or even a small bouquet.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but includes incorrect terms like 'anthropophiles' and 'anthropy'. Also, watch your grammar, for example, 'she watering flowers' should be 'she waters flowers'. Use simple, correct vocabulary and grammar to express your ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, many people love flowers. For example, my sister enjoys them a lot. She decorates her room with fresh flowers and waters them regularly to keep them healthy.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing like 'a place and you can find a variety of flowers through' and 'it's not a reason no for vast flower farms'. Try to structure your sentences clearly and use appropriate vocabulary. Also, avoid unnecessary complexity and focus on clear, direct answers.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Depending on the season, you can see flowers in gardens, parks, and even some fields. Many people also grow flowers at home.

제안: Your answer is honest but contains unnatural phrases like 'flower plunger' and 'in my entire life'. Try to use simple and natural expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question.

예시: Actually, I don't have flowers at home, so I don't usually take photos of them. But if I had some flowers for decoration, I might take pictures to share with my friends.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but there is a small error with the word 'beddings' which should be 'weddings'. Also, try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on many occasions. For instance, they are given during birthdays, anniversaries, graduations, and weddings. Moreover, flowers are sent to express sympathy or to cheer someone up.

× Flowers, with their brilliant colors, soft petals, and relaxing sea sands, bring me huge joy and boost my mood.

✓ Flowers, with their brilliant colors, soft petals, and relaxing sea scents, bring me huge joy and boost my mood.

The phrase 'relaxing sea sands' is incorrect because 'sands' does not describe a scent. The intended meaning is likely 'sea scents' which refers to the smell of the sea, fitting the context of flowers and their sensory attributes.

× They have a way of bringing beauty and life to any environment, whether it's a garden, a waste of flower, or a simple buttonhole.

✓ They have a way of bringing beauty and life to any environment, whether it's a garden, a waste of flowers, or a simple buttonhole.

The phrase 'a waste of flower' is incorrect because 'waste' should be followed by a plural noun when referring to an area covered with many flowers. The correct phrase is 'a waste of flowers' to indicate a large quantity.

× People who love flowers might be called anthropophiles and my sister is also anthropy.

✓ People who love flowers might be called anthropophiles and my sister is also an anthophile.

The word 'anthropy' is incorrect here; the correct noun form is 'anthophile' to describe a person who loves flowers. Also, the article 'an' is needed before 'anthophile' as it starts with a vowel sound.

× She has decorated her room with flowers and she watering flowers to keep them healthy and vibrant.

✓ She has decorated her room with flowers and she waters flowers to keep them healthy and vibrant.

The phrase 'she watering flowers' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'she waters flowers' to maintain subject-verb agreement and proper tense.

× Definitely, I come from a place and you can find a variety of flowers through.

✓ Definitely, I come from a place where you can find a variety of flowers.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'where' connects the clauses properly, making the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× The prevalence might vary depending on the season or specific location within the area.

✓ The prevalence might vary depending on the season or the specific location within the area.

Adding the definite article 'the' before 'specific location' improves clarity and correctness in this context.

× While it's not a reason no for vast flower farms, you will likely see flowers in gardens, public spaces, and perhaps even some fields, especially during blossom season.

✓ While it's not a reason for vast flower farms, you will likely see flowers in gardens, public spaces, and perhaps even some fields, especially during blossom season.

The phrase 'a reason no for' is incorrect. Removing 'no' corrects the phrase to 'a reason for', which is the proper expression.

× People also cultivate flowers in their homes and shops.

✓ People also cultivate flowers at their homes and shops.

The preposition 'at' is more appropriate when referring to locations like homes and shops where cultivation happens.

× To be honest, I don't even have any kind of flowers in my house, so taking photos of them is something I would not do in my entire life.

✓ To be honest, I don't even have any kind of flowers in my house, so taking photos of them is something I would never do in my entire life.

The modal verb phrase 'would not do' is less natural here; 'would never do' better expresses the strong negative intention.

× But let's just say if I ever had a flower plunger in my room for decoration purposes, I might take some photos of it, maybe just to show to my friends or to save that memory.

✓ But let's just say if I ever had a flower planter in my room for decoration purposes, I might take some photos of it, maybe just to show my friends or to save that memory.

The word 'plunger' is incorrect; the correct term is 'planter' for a container used to grow flowers. Also, 'show to my friends' should be 'show my friends' for correct verb-object structure.

× For example, flowers are commonly given during birthdays, anniversaries, graduations and beddings to celebrate special moments.

✓ For example, flowers are commonly given during birthdays, anniversaries, graduations, and weddings to celebrate special moments.

The word 'beddings' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'weddings'. Also, commas are added for proper list punctuation.