Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“making”应为“make”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化句子，避免语法错误，并使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they make the air fresh and brighten up the house. I feel happy whenever I see them.

제안: 回答中出现了代词错误（she与he混用），影响表达清晰度。建议注意代词使用，保持一致性，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, my uncle really loves flowers and he takes great care of his plants. Because he believes flowers bring happiness and beauty to life, he spends a lot of time planting them.

제안: 回答语法错误严重，表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句型表达否定和原因，避免使用错误的词汇和结构。

예시: No, there are not many flowers where I live because my mother doesn't like planting them. She thinks planting flowers is very tiring.

제안: 回答较好，但“in full of bloom”表达不准确，建议使用正确的短语“in full bloom”。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I find them very beautiful. I enjoy photographing them in the summertime when they are in full bloom.

제안: 回答内容较好，但“bliss”用词不当，建议使用更合适的词汇如“best wishes”，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, sending flowers is a good way to express love and best wishes on occasions such as weddings and birthdays. It helps strengthen relationships between family and friends.

× Yes, I love flowers, they allow us to breathe fresh air and making the house more beautiful.

✓ Yes, I love flowers, they allow us to breathe fresh air and make the house more beautiful.

这里的动词应该与前面的动词保持一致，使用原形动词make而不是动名词making。因为前面是并列结构，动词形式应一致。

× Yes, my uncle really loves flowers and she takes great care of his plants.

✓ Yes, my uncle really loves flowers and he takes great care of his plants.

这里的代词与先行词不一致，uncle是男性，应该用he而不是she。

× No. Hmm, due to say that my mother don't like planting flowers, she sing plant flowers is very tired.

✓ No. Hmm, I have to say that my mother doesn't like planting flowers, she says planting flowers is very tiring.

这里有多个代词和动词形式错误。don't应改为doesn't，因为主语是第三人称单数my mother；sing应为says；plant应为planting，动名词形式。

× I enjoy photographing them in the summertime when they are in full of bloom.

✓ I enjoy photographing them in the summertime when they are in full bloom.

短语应为"in full bloom"，不需要介词of。

× Yes, it's a good way to express love and bliss such as weddings and birthdays.

✓ Yes, it's a good way to express love and happiness on occasions such as weddings and birthdays.

bliss通常指极乐，不适合用在此处表达幸福感，改为happiness更合适；并且表达“在某些场合”应使用on occasions such as。

× It helps us to strengthen relationships between family and friends.

✓ It helps us strengthen relationships between family and friends.

动词help后面接动词时，to可以省略，且此处不需要to，去掉to更自然。