Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by directly stating your opinion first, then supporting it with clear reasons. Avoid redundancy and grammatical errors, and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they smell wonderful and brighten up any special occasion, like birthdays.

제안: Focus on completing your sentences clearly and use correct verb forms. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific details about why your mom loves flowers.

예시: Yes, my mom loves flowers because they are fragrant and have vibrant colors. I often give her bouquets on special occasions like her birthday or our anniversary.

제안: Try to reduce filler words like 'umm' and 'uh' to make your speech more fluent. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be more specific about your environment.

예시: Actually, there are not many flowers where I live because I live in a big city and rarely visit parks. Therefore, if I want to see flowers, I usually go to a flower park.

제안: Work on sentence structure and grammar to make your answer clearer. Avoid repetition and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

예시: Not really, because I don't like taking photos every day, and flowers are not my usual subject. Also, I am quite busy with homework and daily routines, so I rarely take photos.

제안: Clarify your ideas and use correct expressions. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific reasons why people send flowers.

예시: I'm not sure, but I think people often send flowers to their loved ones because it is a good way to express feelings and bring happiness, which helps maintain relationships.

× Yes, definitely almost Women really love flowers because it smells, is really good and they also want to receive the brunch of flowers in the special day in a in some birthday.

✓ Yes, definitely, almost all women really love flowers because they smell really good and they also want to receive a bunch of flowers on special days like birthdays.

The original sentence incorrectly capitalizes 'Women' and uses 'it smells' which is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so 'they smell' is correct. 'Brunch' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'bunch'. Also, 'in the special day in a in some birthday' is awkward and incorrect; it should be 'on special days like birthdays'. The pronoun 'they' correctly refers to 'women' now.

× Oh yes, my mom is really love flowers.

✓ Oh yes, my mom really loves flowers.

The verb 'love' must agree with the third person singular subject 'my mom'. The correct form is 'loves' without 'is'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'is really love' which is ungrammatical.

× She love receiving like a bunch of flowers because it's fragrant and vibrant color.

✓ She loves receiving a bunch of flowers because they are fragrant and vibrant in color.

The verb 'love' must be 'loves' to agree with 'she'. Also, 'it's fragrant and vibrant color' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so 'they are fragrant and vibrant in color' is correct.

× Umm I often give them in a special occasions like anniversary or her birthdays and she really.

✓ I often give them on special occasions like anniversaries or her birthday, and she really appreciates it.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on' is used with 'special occasions'. 'A special occasions' is incorrect because 'occasions' is plural, so 'special occasions' without 'a' is correct. 'Anniversary' should be plural if referring to multiple occasions. The sentence was incomplete, so it was completed for clarity.

× Actually not, because I live in a big cities and I rarely go to the umm, park, uh, so I rarely see flowers around uh, where I live.

✓ Actually not, because I live in a big city and I rarely go to the park, so I rarely see flowers around where I live.

'A big cities' is incorrect because 'cities' is plural and 'a' is singular. It should be 'a big city'. Also, 'the umm, park' should be 'the park' for clarity and correctness.

× So if I want to see them, I will uh, go to the flowers park and see them.

✓ So if I want to see them, I will go to the flower park and see them.

'Flowers park' is incorrect; it should be 'flower park' as a compound noun. The definite article 'the' is correctly used here.

× Not really because I don't really love take photos every day and flower is is a choice.

✓ Not really, because I don't really love taking photos every day and flowers are a choice.

'Love take photos' is incorrect; it should be 'love taking photos' (verb + -ing form). 'Flower is is a choice' is incorrect; 'flowers are a choice' is correct because 'flowers' is plural and 'are' agrees with it.

× But I don't even do that because I'm quite busy at the day in daily basis.

✓ But I don't even do that because I'm quite busy during the day on a daily basis.

'At the day' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'during the day'. 'In daily basis' is incorrect; it should be 'on a daily basis'.

× I do homework, I do my routine so I didn't do that.

✓ I do homework, I follow my routine, so I don't do that.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do homework' and past tense 'didn't do that' inconsistently. Since the context is habitual action, present tense 'don't do that' is appropriate.

× I'm not sure but I think they will send flowers to their loved ones because sending flowers is a good way to express themselves for the opposite.

✓ I'm not sure, but I think they send flowers to their loved ones because sending flowers is a good way to express their feelings to others.

'Will send' implies future, but the question is about habitual action, so simple present 'send' is better. 'Express themselves for the opposite' is unclear and incorrect; it should be 'express their feelings to others'.

× So in each bring a lot of happy and blessed help maintain relationship.

✓ So, they bring a lot of happiness and blessings and help maintain relationships.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. It lacks a clear subject and verb agreement. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the structure.