Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“flowers is”应为“flowers are”，“buying flower”应为“buying flowers”。建议注意主谓一致和复数形式的使用，同时避免重复表达“love”。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize beauty. I often buy fresh flowers for my home, as looking at them helps me feel relaxed and improves my mood.

제안: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清，如代词错误“he”应为“she”，重复词汇“every every”，句子不完整。建议加强句子结构的完整性和代词的正确使用。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers as well. She believes that flowers symbolize beauty and life. Every week, she buys fresh flowers for our house, especially roses, because she loves their color and fragrance.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如缺少谓语动词“my house with a big garden”应为“my house has a big garden”，动词时态和主谓一致错误。建议注意句子完整性和时态一致。

예시: Yes, I live in a house with a big garden where my mother grows many flowers, especially roses. She loves roses the most because of their lovely color and pleasant fragrance, which always lifts my mood.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“the things is beautiful”应为“things that are beautiful”，“beauty of lime”表达不准确。建议使用准确表达和避免重复词汇。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I am a big fan of photography. I enjoy capturing beautiful things in daily life, and flowers are especially lovely subjects to photograph.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“send flower”应为“send flowers”，“the wedding”应为“weddings”，“the mother's days”应为“Mother's Day”，时态使用不当。建议注意冠词使用和时态一致。

예시: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers as gifts, especially on weddings and Mother's Day. For example, last month was my mother's birthday, and I gave her a beautiful bouquet of roses.

× I think that flowers is a sign of beauty

✓ I think that flowers are a sign of beauty

flowers 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 are，而不是单数 is。

× I love buying flower in my house

✓ I love buying flowers for my house

flower 应为复数形式 flowers，表示多朵花；同时搭配介词 for 表示用途。

× My mom loves flower too.

✓ My mom loves flowers too.

flower 应为复数形式 flowers，表示多朵花。

× He he thinks flower is a symbol of beauty and life.

✓ She thinks flowers are a symbol of beauty and life.

指代妈妈应使用女性代词 she；flower 应为复数 flowers，谓语动词用复数 are。

× Every every week he will. He bought some fresh flower for house, especially roses.

✓ Every week she buys some fresh flowers for the house, especially roses.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时 buys；flower 应为复数 flowers；house 前应加定冠词 the。

× She loved the color and the fragrance.

✓ She loves the color and the fragrance.

描述习惯或现在状态应使用一般现在时 loves。

× Yes, my house with a big garden that my mom will grow some flowers in it, especially the roses.

✓ Yes, my house has a big garden where my mom grows some flowers, especially roses.

原句缺少谓语动词，需补充 has；关系从句中用 where 表示地点；动词时态用一般现在时 grows。

× My mom love the roses the best because of the lovely color and the pleasant fragrance in the garden.

✓ My mom loves the roses best because of the lovely color and the pleasant fragrance in the garden.

主语为第三人称单数 mom，谓语动词 love 应加 s 变为 loves；the best 中 the 可省略。

× It bring me a good mood.

✓ It brings me a good mood.

主语 it 是第三人称单数，谓语动词 bring 应加 s 变为 brings。

× especially the things is beautiful.

✓ especially when things are beautiful.

things 是复数，谓语动词应为 are；加连词 when 使句子完整。

× I think that flower is actually a beauty of lime, so I love love it.

✓ I think that flowers are actually a beauty of life, so I love it.

flower 应为复数 flowers；beauty of lime 应为 beauty of life；love love 重复，应去掉一个。

× people always send flower as a gift

✓ people always send flowers as gifts

flower 应为复数 flowers；gift 应为复数 gifts，表示多次送礼。

× Last month is my mom birthday.

✓ Last month was my mom's birthday.

描述过去时间应使用过去时 was；birthday 前应加所有格 's。

× I send her a beautiful flowers with roses, it's really beautiful.

✓ I sent her beautiful flowers with roses; they were really beautiful.

send 应用过去时 sent；flowers 是复数，前面不加 a；用复数代词 they 指代 flowers；分号连接两个相关句子。