Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and use plural forms correctly. Also, make your answer more natural by varying vocabulary and sentence structure. For example, instead of repeating 'fragrance of flower', you can say 'the pleasant scent of flowers'.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because their pleasant scent is very beautiful and refreshing.

제안: Focus on grammatical accuracy and clarity. Use correct plural forms and pronouns. Also, organise your answer logically and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, but my favourite is my girlfriend. I gifted her roses and sunflowers on her birthday last month.

제안: Improve sentence structure and grammar, especially plural forms and prepositions. Use linking words to make your answer coherent. Be more specific about the types of flowers and the garden.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there is a big garden opposite my house. The garden has various types of flowers, such as sunflowers, and their fragrance is very pleasant.

제안: Work on grammar and sentence clarity. Use plural forms and correct prepositions. Also, explain your ideas more clearly and avoid vague expressions like 'more expensive and valuable' without context.

예시: Yes, I take photos of flowers, but not regularly. I usually take pictures of flowers when I travel to historical places, especially those that are rare and beautiful.

제안: Use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Instead of 'showing relationship', say 'to express their feelings' or 'to show affection'. Also, organise your answer with linking words.

예시: In my country, many people often send flowers to others to express their feelings. For example, I also send flowers to my girlfriend to show my affection.

× Yes, I love flower because the fragrance of flower is very beautiful and I like the fragrance of flower.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because the fragrance of flowers is very beautiful and I like the fragrance of flowers.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general, not a single flower. Using plural form is appropriate when talking about things in general or multiple items.

× Yes, I know many person who love lover but one of the most favorite person is my girlfriend who love flowers and I gifted rose and sunflower on his birthday at last month.

✓ Yes, I know many people who love flowers but one of my most favorite persons is my girlfriend who loves flowers and I gifted a rose and a sunflower on her birthday last month.

The word 'person' should be plural 'people' when referring to many individuals. 'Love lover' is incorrect; it should be 'love flowers'. 'Most favorite person' should be 'my most favorite persons' or 'one of my favorite people'. 'Who love' should be 'who loves' to agree with singular 'girlfriend'. 'Gifted rose and sunflower' needs articles 'a rose and a sunflower'. 'His birthday' should be 'her birthday' to match 'girlfriend'. 'At last month' should be 'last month' without 'at'.

× Yes, there are a lot of flower where I live because there is a big garden opposite side of my house and into the garden there are many type of flower like those flowers sunflower and also the fragrance of flower is very good.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live because there is a big garden opposite my house and in the garden there are many types of flowers like sunflowers and also the fragrance of flowers is very good.

'A lot of flower' should be 'a lot of flowers' to indicate plural. 'Opposite side of my house' should be 'opposite my house'. 'Into the garden' is better as 'in the garden'. 'Many type of flower' should be 'many types of flowers' to match plural. 'Those flowers sunflower' is incorrect; 'sunflowers' is sufficient. 'Fragrance of flower' should be 'fragrance of flowers'.

× Yes, I take photo of flower but not on regular basis. I take a photo of flower when I travel to at ancient areas and I like to take picture of flowers which is more expensive and valuable.

✓ Yes, I take photos of flowers but not on a regular basis. I take photos of flowers when I travel to ancient areas and I like to take pictures of flowers which are more expensive and valuable.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' when talking generally. 'Photo of flower' should be 'photos of flowers'. 'On regular basis' needs article 'a regular basis'. 'Travel to at ancient areas' should be 'travel to ancient areas'. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to match context. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× According to me where I live, many people send flowers to other people for showing relationship between them and me also send flower to my girlfriend for showing relationship between us.

✓ According to me, where I live, many people send flowers to other people to show the relationship between them, and I also send flowers to my girlfriend to show the relationship between us.

'Send flower' should be 'send flowers' to match plural. 'For showing relationship' is better as 'to show the relationship'. Added commas for clarity. 'According to me' is acceptable but 'In my opinion' is more natural.