Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够连贯，表达不清晰，且有语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并说明原因，避免重复和无意义的词汇。

예시: I don't love flowers because I'm allergic to pollen, which causes my skin to itch and become irritated.

제안: 回答结构混乱，语法错误较多，表达不完整。建议使用完整句子，清晰描述人物和行为，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

예시: My mother loves flowers very much. When we are walking on the road, she often takes photos of beautiful and colorful flowers she notices.

제안: 回答内容不准确且表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题，并提供具体信息，避免重复和语法错误。

예시: There are not many flowers where I live, partly because I am allergic to pollen and try to avoid them.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议简洁表达观点，并用连接词连接句子，使表达更自然。

예시: I am not a big fan of flowers, so I usually don't take photos of them. However, if I see some very beautiful flowers, I might take a photo and share it with others.

제안: 回答基本完整，但语法和表达不够准确。建议使用完整句子，明确表达节日和场合，并说明送花的意义。

예시: Absolutely. People in my country often send flowers to each other during festivals or anniversaries to express their feelings and good wishes.

× I don't like flowers because I'm allergic to pollen and when I touch it my skin will. The business and I will. Feel it. So to be honest, I don't like flowers.

✓ I don't like flowers because I'm allergic to pollen, and when I touch it, my skin feels itchy. So to be honest, I don't like flowers.

原句结构混乱，句子不完整，导致表达不清晰。应将断开的句子合并，补充缺失的动词，使句子完整通顺。

× My mother loves flowers so much and when we working on the road she will take some photos if he notice some flowers which was so beautiful and color and colorize but because of my personal.

✓ My mother loves flowers so much, and when we are working on the road, she will take some photos if she notices some flowers which are so beautiful and colorful, but because of my personal reasons...

动词形式错误，'working'前缺少助动词'are'，'he'应为'she'，'notice'应为第三人称单数'notices'，'was'应为复数形式'are'，'color'应为形容词'colorful'。句子结构不完整，需补充。

× As I say, I'm allergic to pollutants, so I can't. I can't touch the flowers. So far in my living there are no flowers.

✓ As I said, I'm allergic to pollen, so I can't touch flowers. So far, in my place, there are no flowers.

'pollutants'（污染物）与上下文不符，应为'pollen'（花粉）；'the flowers'不需要定冠词；'in my living'表达不准确，应为'in my place'或'where I live'。

× To be honest, I'm not really like flowers. I'm not a big fan of flowers so in most circumstance I will not take photos. But if I but if I look to some very beautiful flowers maybe I will take photo, eat and send.

✓ To be honest, I don't really like flowers. I'm not a big fan of flowers, so in most circumstances, I will not take photos. But if I see some very beautiful flowers, maybe I will take photos and send them.

'I'm not really like flowers'应为'I don't really like flowers'；'in most circumstance'应为'in most circumstances'；'look to'应为'see'；'take photo, eat and send'表达不清，应为'take photos and send them'。

× Absolutely, when some famous festival coming or their anniversary, people often send flowers to each other to express their emotion of.

✓ Absolutely, when some famous festival is coming or it's their anniversary, people often send flowers to each other to express their emotions.

缺少动词'is'；'their anniversary'前应加主语'it's'；'emotion of'表达不完整，应为'emotions'。