Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不清，如“I felt though they grow a lot of leaves but they do not blossom”表达不准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且句子结构更完整。

예시: Yes, I love flowers. I have even tried planting some in my garden. However, although the plants grew many leaves, they never blossomed.

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“my my”和“to to to to”，影响流畅度。建议简洁表达，避免重复，并且句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, my mother-in-law also loves flowers. We plant them together in our garden, but unfortunately, we haven't been successful in making them bloom.

제안: 回答较好，但“big fan of flowers”应为“big fans of flowers”，注意单复数一致。建议使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because some of my neighbors are big fans of flowers and are very good at planting them. As a result, their gardens look gorgeous.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇如“I I”和“the the”，影响表达清晰。建议避免重复，并且表达更自然。

예시: Oh yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life, although I'm not very skilled at photography. However, I think it's more important to capture the feeling I get when I see them.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如“to to”和表达不清晰。建议简化句子，明确表达，并避免重复。

예시: Oh, I'm afraid people don't often send flowers in my country. Instead, we usually give gifts like fruits or small potted trees to celebrate different occasions.

× I felt though they grow a lot of leaves but they do not blossom.

✓ I felt that although they grow a lot of leaves, they do not blossom.

这里的错误是句子结构不完整，缺少连接词。应使用连词'that although'来连接两个分句，使句子完整通顺。

× Yes, of course my my mother-in-law also loves flowers and she plants flowers along with me in our garden, but unfortunately both of us failed to to to to blossom them.

✓ Yes, of course my mother-in-law also loves flowers and she plants flowers along with me in our garden, but unfortunately both of us failed to make them blossom.

这里重复了'my'，属于代词使用错误。且'failed to to to to blossom them'中动词搭配错误，应使用'make them blossom'。

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers because some of my neighbors are really big fan of flowers and they are also very good at flower planting.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers because some of my neighbors are really big fans of flowers and they are also very good at flower planting.

'neighbors'是复数，'big fan'应改为复数形式'big fans'，保持主谓一致。

× Oh yes, I I take photos of flowers in my daily life a lot, though I'm not very good at it. But I think it's more important to record the the feeling that I saw them.

✓ Oh yes, I take photos of flowers in my daily life a lot, though I'm not very good at it. But I think it's more important to record the feeling when I see them.

这里重复了'I'和'the'，属于代词和冠词使用错误。'the feeling that I saw them'表达不准确，应改为'record the feeling when I see them'。

× Oh, I'm afraid it's not quite often, but we do seem a lot of things to each others to to cherish different circumstances.

✓ Oh, I'm afraid it's not quite often, but we do give a lot of things to each other to cherish different circumstances.

'each others'应为单数形式'each other'，且'do seem a lot of things'表达错误，应为'do give a lot of things'。

× For example, we send fruits or sometimes we even send trees that kind of mini trees to us.

✓ For example, we send fruits or sometimes we even send mini trees to each other.

'send trees that kind of mini trees to us'表达不清且代词使用错误，应改为'send mini trees to each other'。