Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了喜爱花朵的情感，但句子结构较简单，且部分表达不够自然，例如“bring a good mood for me”可以更地道。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并适当丰富细节。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, sunflowers, and lilies. They always brighten my day and lift my spirits because of their vibrant colors and pleasant scents.

제안: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She enjoys planting various kinds on our balcony, which makes our home feel lively and colorful.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，如“more fresher”应为“fresher”。建议注意语法准确性，并尝试提供更具体的细节。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my home because my mother has planted roses, sunflowers, and lilies. They not only beautify the area but also help freshen the air.

제안: 回答中表达不够自然，且有语法和用词错误，如“it's colorful and smile”不合适。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because their beauty makes me feel energetic and relaxed. Looking at these pictures always lifts my mood and gives me hope.

제안: 回答不完整且含有犹豫词汇，表达不流畅。建议提前准备答案，避免使用口头语，并完整表达观点。

예시: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers on special occasions like New Year's and birthdays. Couples especially like to give flowers to express their love.

× I'm fond of flowers such as rose, sunflowers and Lily.

✓ I'm fond of flowers such as roses, sunflowers and lilies.

名词复数形式错误。'rose'和'Lily'应使用复数形式'roses'和'lilies'，因为这里指的是多种花。

× she plants many flowers in the balcony in my home.

✓ she plants many flowers on the balcony in my home.

介词使用错误。'balcony'前应使用介词'on'，表示在阳台上。

× such as rose, sunflowers, and Lily.

✓ such as roses, sunflowers, and lilies.

名词复数形式错误。'rose'和'Lily'应使用复数形式'roses'和'lilies'。

× These flowers can make air more fresher.

✓ These flowers can make the air fresher.

比较级使用错误。'more fresher'是重复比较级，应改为'fresher'。同时，'air'前应加定冠词'the'。

× These flowers can make air more fresher.

✓ These flowers can make the air fresher.

'air'前缺少定冠词'the'，因为这里指特定的空气。

× When I see these pictures I feel more energetic and relaxed, even hopeful because it's colorful and smile.

✓ When I see these pictures I feel more energetic and relaxed, even hopeful because they're colorful and smiling.

代词和动词形式错误。'it's'应改为'they're'指代复数'pictures'，'smile'应改为现在分词'smiling'，形容图片的状态。

× Yes, I know this person who loves flowers is my mother, and she loves, she almost loves all kinds of flowers and she plants many flowers in the balcony in my home.

✓ Yes, I know the person who loves flowers is my mother, and she almost loves all kinds of flowers and plants many flowers on the balcony in my home.

句子结构混乱，重复使用'she loves'。应简化为'she almost loves'。同时，'the balcony'前应使用定冠词，介词应为'on'。

× Yes, they often send flowers in some special days, for example. New Year's or birthday? Uh, some couples often send flowers for their.

✓ Yes, they often send flowers on some special days, for example, New Year's or birthdays. Uh, some couples often send flowers to each other.

句子结构不完整，介词使用错误。'in some special days'应为'on some special days'，'birthday'应为复数'birthdays'，'send flowers for their'不完整，应改为'send flowers to each other'。