Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子较长且有重复，建议简化句子结构，避免语法错误，并且用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and always make me feel happy. My mother also loves flowers and often buys many to decorate our home, which makes the atmosphere cozy and relaxing.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达，同时可以用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She buys them about once a month and decorates our home with beautiful colors. Whenever I see them, I feel cozy and relaxed.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，建议简化句子结构，使用正确的词汇和语法，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers around my home. For example, the park near my house has a lake surrounded by blooming sunflowers and other flowers, which looks very beautiful.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不完整，建议注意句子完整性和语法准确性，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

예시: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I'm not very interested in photography. However, if I see some unique or beautifully arranged flowers, I might take a photo because they catch my attention.

제안: 回答中表达不清且有矛盾，建议理清逻辑，避免重复，使用准确的词汇和句子结构，使表达更清晰。

예시: Actually, people in China don't often send flowers. They usually send flowers only on special occasions, such as visiting patients or celebrating anniversaries.

× my mother really love it

✓ my mother really loves it

主语是单数第三人称“my mother”，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“loves”，而不是“love”。

× she bought a she buy the last

✓ she bought some last time

句子中时态混乱，前半句用过去时“bought”，后半句错误地用现在时“buy”，应统一使用过去时。

× She put a lot of flowers in home

✓ She puts a lot of flowers in the home

“put”应根据主语“she”用第三人称单数形式“puts”，且“in home”应加定冠词“the home”。

× She always buy flowers

✓ She always buys flowers

主语是第三人称单数“she”，动词应加-s，变为“buys”。

× there are plenty of hours around our homes

✓ there are plenty of flowers around our homes

“hours”应为“flowers”，原句为拼写错误。

× there are parked around my around next to my home

✓ there are parks around next to my home

“parked”是动词过去分词，错误用作名词，应改为“parks”。

× there the there's the lake surrounded by by the lots of flowers

✓ there's a lake surrounded by lots of flowers

重复使用“by”，且“the lots of flowers”应为“lots of flowers”，且缺少冠词“a”。

× someone put decorate them very beautiful

✓ someone decorates them very beautifully

“put decorate”结构错误，应使用动词“decorates”，副词修饰动词用“beautifully”。

× it can stimulate my sense of

✓ it can stimulate my senses

“sense of”后面缺少宾语，应改为复数“senses”表示感官。

× people always send flowers. In some occasions, like visiting the patients or or celebrating the anniversaries, people do not usually send flowers

✓ people do not always send flowers. On some occasions, like visiting patients or celebrating anniversaries, people usually send flowers

“always”与后文矛盾，应改为“do not always”，介词“in”应改为“on”，冠词“the”不应用于复数泛指。