Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不完整，如“flowers belong to the.”这句话不完整且影响理解。建议使用完整句子表达观点，并注意冠词和词序的正确使用。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten up my home and improve the air quality, which makes me feel happier and more relaxed.

제안: 回答中时态使用不准确，如“my uncle love”应为“loves”，以及“when he grows up”应为“when he grew up”。建议注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, my uncle loves flowers because he dreamed of planting many flowers in his garden when he was a child. Therefore, when he grew up, he decided to plant flowers on his balcony and take good care of them.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“need to be take care of healthily”应为“need to be taken care of properly”。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的被动语态和更准确的表达。

예시: No, there are not many flowers where I live because I stay at my school, and although there are some flowers, they require proper care which no one provides.

제안: 回答中时态混用，如“every time I went to the outside, I will take photos”应统一时态。建议使用简单现在时描述习惯动作，并避免冗余表达。

예시: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers because they are beautiful. For example, whenever I go outside, I take pictures of flowers to share on my WeChat moments.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，如“flowers is has a lacking meaning”不合逻辑。建议使用准确表达花的象征意义，并避免语法错误。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts because flowers symbolize good wishes and make recipients feel happy.

× Physically, flowers belong to the. The plants that can make the air more fresh.

✓ Physically, flowers belong to the plants that can make the air fresher.

这里“plants”是复数，前面“the”后面不应该断句，且“more fresh”应改为比较级“fresher”。

× Yes, my uncle love flowers very much because he had a dream when he was a kid that planted many flowers in his garden.

✓ Yes, my uncle loves flowers very much because he had a dream when he was a kid that he planted many flowers in his garden.

主语是第三人称单数“my uncle”，动词“love”应加-s变为“loves”。

× So when he grows up he decided to plant many flowers in his balcony and take care of their health.

✓ So when he grew up, he decided to plant many flowers on his balcony and take care of their health.

这里描述过去的动作，应该用过去时“grew up”而非现在时“grows up”。

× So when he grows up he decided to plant many flowers in his balcony and take care of their health.

✓ So when he grew up, he decided to plant many flowers on his balcony and take care of their health.

“plant flowers on the balcony”是正确搭配，介词应为“on”而非“in”。

× No, there aren't many flowers in the place I live because I live in my school and there are real flowers here.

✓ No, there aren't many flowers in the place where I live because I live in my school and there are real flowers here.

缺少关系代词“where”引导定语从句，句子不完整。

× You know, the flowers need to be take care of healthily so nobody can take care of them.

✓ You know, the flowers need to be taken care of healthily so nobody can take care of them.

被动语态中“take”应使用过去分词“taken”。

× For example, every time I went to the outside, I will take photos of the beautiful flowers which will decorate my moments in my WeChat.

✓ For example, every time I go outside, I take photos of the beautiful flowers which decorate my moments on my WeChat.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，“went”改为“go”，“will take”改为“take”，“will decorate”改为“decorate”。

× For example, every time I went to the outside, I will take photos of the beautiful flowers which will decorate my moments in my WeChat.

✓ For example, every time I go outside, I take photos of the beautiful flowers which decorate my moments on my WeChat.

“go outside”不需要冠词“the”，“in my WeChat”应改为“on my WeChat”。

× It's a common thing that people send flowers as gift to other people because flowers is has a lacking meaning and people will be happy to receive a bunch of flowers as a gift from others.

✓ It's a common thing that people send flowers as gifts to other people because flowers have a special meaning and people will be happy to receive a bunch of flowers as a gift from others.

“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应为“have”；“gift”应用复数“gifts”；“is has a lacking meaning”表达错误，改为“have a special meaning”。

× It's a common thing that people send flowers as gift to other people because flowers is has a lacking meaning and people will be happy to receive a bunch of flowers as a gift from others.

✓ It's a common thing that people send flowers as gifts to other people because flowers have a special meaning and people will be happy to receive a bunch of flowers as a gift from others.

“send ... as gifts to other people”中介词“to”使用正确，前面“as gift”应为复数“as gifts”。