Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时句子结构不够自然，表达有些重复和不连贯。建议简化句子，避免冗余，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they have bright colors and pleasant scents. Moreover, they can decorate my home and express emotions during special occasions.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议注意动词时态和搭配，句子结构应更完整自然。

예시: My mom really loves flowers. She often cultivates them and has her own beautiful garden.

제안: 词汇使用不准确，句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确的名词复数形式，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, my university has many different kinds of flowers. Places decorated with flowers greatly enhance the area's beauty.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，句子含义模糊且有语法错误。建议明确表达拍照的原因和频率，避免无意义的词汇。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy capturing their beauty in different seasons.

제안: 表达不准确且含义不明。建议用更清晰的句子说明送花的习俗和场合，避免错误的词汇搭配。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express their feelings, especially on special occasions like Valentine's Day.

× Yes, of course, the flower has a bright color and it is aromatic.

✓ Yes, of course, flowers have bright colors and are aromatic.

这里“flower”应使用复数形式“flowers”，因为后文提到多种花的特征。名词单复数不一致导致表达不准确。

× Also, the flower can decorate my houses and in addition, flowers can express the emotions and the special occasions.

✓ Also, flowers can decorate my house and, in addition, flowers can express emotions and special occasions.

“flower”应为复数“flowers”；“houses”应为单数“house”，因为通常指自己的家；“the emotions”和“the special occasions”中“the”不必要，应去掉。

× My mom truly love with flowers and she often continued cultivated the flowers and she has her own garden.

✓ My mom truly loves flowers and she often continues cultivating flowers and she has her own garden.

主语是第三人称单数“my mom”，动词应加-s变为“loves”；“love with”搭配错误，应为“loves flowers”；“continued cultivated”时态和形式错误，应为“continues cultivating”。

× Yes, my university has a different kinds of flowers.

✓ Yes, my university has different kinds of flowers.

“a different kinds”中“a”与复数“kinds”不匹配，应去掉“a”。

× The places decorated full of the flowers can enhance the beauty of the area.

✓ Places decorated full of flowers can enhance the beauty of the area.

“The places”不特指，应去掉定冠词“the”；“the flowers”此处泛指花，应去掉“the”。

× Yes, of course I like to capture the beautiful moments of the flowers because they will wider 3 months ago.

✓ Yes, of course I like to capture the beautiful moments of flowers because they bloomed for three months ago.

“the flowers”泛指应去掉“the”；“will wider 3 months ago”时态和词汇错误，应改为“bloomed for three months ago”。

× Yes, of course I like to capture the beautiful moments of the flowers because they will wider 3 months ago.

✓ Yes, of course I like to capture the beautiful moments of flowers because they bloomed for three months ago.

“will wider”时态错误，且“wider”用词不当，应使用过去式“bloomed”表示过去发生的动作。

× Yes, of course, at the period that I said flowers can express the emotions.

✓ Yes, of course, during the period I mentioned, flowers can express emotions.

“at the period”搭配错误，应为“during the period”；“that I said”表达不自然，应改为“I mentioned”；“the emotions”泛指应去掉“the”。

× So in my country, boys are willing to send the Rose to God at the volunteers day.

✓ So in my country, boys are willing to send roses to God on Volunteers Day.

“the Rose”应为复数“roses”，且“Rose”不需大写；“at the volunteers day”搭配错误，应为“on Volunteers Day”，且专有名词首字母大写。