Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时注意主谓一致，例如将"its"改为"their"，并避免重复表达。可以简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because of their bright colors and pleasant fragrance. They brighten up my house and create a cheerful atmosphere. I also use flowers to express my emotions or celebrate special occasions like birthdays.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如"to try to look after carefully"应改为"tries to take care of them carefully"，注意时态和主谓一致。建议使用连词使句子更连贯。

예시: One person who loves flowers is my mother. She is passionate about growing flowers and plants. She has a beautiful garden and tries to take care of it carefully because she thinks gardening is her favorite pastime.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达重复，如"we loves"应为"we love"，"it's very beautiful and plant a lot of flowers"表达不清。建议简化句子并使用连接词。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. My mother loves buying flowers to decorate the house and create a lively atmosphere. She also has a beautiful garden in front of our home with many different kinds of flowers.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词，如"have, uh, showed"应改为"have shown"。建议避免口语化词汇，句子结构应更清晰。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because they make my pictures more lively and beautiful. I have also seen many influencers on TikTok sharing their flower photos, which inspired me to follow this trend.

제안: 回答中句子结构不完整，第二句缺少主语和谓语。建议合并句子并使用连接词，使表达更完整自然。

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially on special occasions like weddings, birthdays, and anniversaries. Sending flowers is a way to express emotions and celebrate these events.

× Yes, of course, I love flowers because of its bright colors and pleasant fragrance.

✓ Yes, of course, I love flowers because of their bright colors and pleasant fragrance.

flowers 是复数，指代时应使用复数物主代词 their，而不是单数的 its。

× It can also brighten up my house and create a cheerful atmosphere.

✓ They can also brighten up my house and create a cheerful atmosphere.

flowers 是复数，指代时应使用复数代词 they，而不是单数的 it。

× I also use it to express my emotions or to celebrate some special occasions like birthdays.

✓ I also use them to express my emotions or to celebrate some special occasions like birthdays.

flowers 是复数，指代时应使用复数代词 them，而不是单数的 it。

× She's passionate about flowers, growing flowers and plants.

✓ She's passionate about flowers, growing flowers, and plants.

列举多个项目时，最后两个项目之间应加逗号和连词 and，形成正确的并列结构。

× She has a beautiful garden and to try to look after carefully and she think gardening is her best pastime.

✓ She has a beautiful garden and tries to look after it carefully, and she thinks gardening is her best pastime.

主语是 she，动词应使用第三人称单数形式 tries 和 thinks；garden 是单数，需用代词 it 指代；句子结构需调整使其完整通顺。

× my mother, we loves to buy some flowers to decorate the house and create a lively atmosphere.

✓ my mother, we love to buy some flowers to decorate the house and create a lively atmosphere.

主语是复数 we，动词 love 应使用原形，不加 s。

× Also, she has a beautiful garden just in front of my home and it's very beautiful and plant a lot of flowers.

✓ Also, she has a beautiful garden just in front of my home, and it's very beautiful and has a lot of flowers planted.

句子中缺少动词，plant 应改为被动形式 has a lot of flowers planted，保持句子完整和语法正确。

× I have seen many influencers on in Tiktok have, uh, showed their photos with flowers.

✓ I have seen many influencers on TikTok who have shown their photos with flowers.

介词使用错误，应该用 on TikTok；动词时态应为现在完成时的过去分词 shown；句子结构需调整使其通顺。

× I think these photos were so beautiful and I tried to trend this popularity.

✓ I think these photos are so beautiful, and I tried to follow this trend.

时态应保持一致，photos 现在仍然美丽，用 are；表达“跟随潮流”应使用 follow this trend，而不是 tried to trend this popularity。

× And acknowledging that sending flowers to others can express their emotions or just celebrate their occasions.

✓ And I acknowledge that sending flowers to others can express their emotions or just celebrate their occasions.

句子缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整，使句子结构完整。