Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains several language errors, such as confusing 'flaws' with 'flowers' and awkward phrasing. Try to respond directly to the question with clear sentences, avoid redundancy, and use correct vocabulary. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I love flowers very much. I especially like roses because of their beautiful fragrance and vibrant colors. Flowers make me feel happy and relaxed. I often enjoy spending time in gardens to appreciate different kinds of flowers.

제안: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear references, such as mixing 'his' and 'she' for the same person. Try to use correct pronouns and sentence structures. Also, provide clear and specific details with linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

예시: Yes, I know my neighbor Abiram who loves flowers very much. She has a beautiful garden full of different flowers. Her favorite flower is also the rose, just like me. I often admire her garden when I visit her.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words unnecessarily and use correct verb tenses. Also, provide specific details and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and effective.

예시: Yes, I live in India, which is home to many flower species. Therefore, there are plenty of flowers where I live. In fact, my house has a garden where many flowers are grown, making the environment very pleasant.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'pics of money' and incomplete sentences. Try to answer directly and clearly, avoid contradictions, and use proper sentence structures. Also, keep your answer concise and relevant to the question.

예시: Yes, I am a photographer and I enjoy taking pictures of various subjects, including flowers. However, I don't often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I prefer capturing other scenes. Occasionally, I do photograph flowers when I find them particularly beautiful.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing, such as 'gifted flour' instead of 'gifted flowers'. Try to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others as a symbol of peace and goodwill. For example, during ceremonies or parties, many people give bouquets of flowers as gifts. I also like to give flowers to my friends and family on special occasions.

× I'm a natural person and that's why I like flaws a lot.

✓ I'm a natural person and that's why I like flowers a lot.

The word 'flaws' is incorrect here; the student meant 'flowers'. This is a vocabulary error affecting adjective use. Correcting it to 'flowers' makes the sentence meaningful.

× I think that flaws are the things which everyone should give to another person and the fragrance of loss I like the most.

✓ I think that flowers are the things which everyone should give to another person and the fragrance of flowers I like the most.

The word 'flaws' is incorrectly used instead of 'flowers'. Also, 'loss' is a typo for 'flowers'. Correct pronouns and nouns are necessary for clarity.

× And my favorite flower is rose, and that's why I drag the Rose fragrance a lot.

✓ And my favorite flower is the rose, and that's why I like the rose fragrance a lot.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'rose'. Also, 'drag' is incorrect; it should be 'like'. This corrects singular/plural and verb usage.

× Yes I'll known one person who loves a flower and a lot and who is none another from my neighbor and his name is Abiram and she loves floral a lot and and to seen that I saw a lot of flowers in the in his garden and his favorite flower is also rose.

✓ Yes, I know one person who loves flowers a lot and who is none other than my neighbor. His name is Abiram and he loves flowers a lot. To prove that, I have seen a lot of flowers in his garden and his favorite flower is also the rose.

'I'll known' is incorrect; it should be 'I know'. 'None another' should be 'none other'. 'She' is incorrect pronoun for 'Abiram' (male name), so 'he' is correct. 'Floral' is an adjective, 'flowers' is noun. 'To seen' should be 'I have seen' for present perfect tense.

× Yes I'll known one person who loves a flower and a lot and who is none another from my neighbor and his name is Abiram and she loves floral a lot and and to seen that I saw a lot of flowers in the in his garden and his favorite flower is also rose.

✓ Yes, I know one person who loves flowers a lot and who is none other than my neighbor. His name is Abiram and he loves flowers a lot. To prove that, I have seen a lot of flowers in his garden and his favorite flower is also the rose.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrect for 'Abiram', a male name. It should be 'he'. Correct pronoun use is essential for clarity.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× Well I am from India and India is a native country and in in my country there are very number of flower species there and that's why I think where where I live there are a lot of flowers and in my house there was a garden and where a lot of flowers are granted.

✓ Well, I am from India and India is a native country. In my country, there are a large number of flower species and that's why I think where I live there are a lot of flowers. In my house, there is a garden where a lot of flowers are grown.

'Very number' is incorrect; it should be 'a large number'. 'Was' should be 'is' to match present tense. 'Granted' is incorrect; it should be 'grown'. Correct quantifiers and verb forms improve clarity.

× In my house there was a garden and where a lot of flowers are granted.

✓ In my house, there is a garden where a lot of flowers are grown.

The verb 'was' should be 'is' to indicate present tense. 'Granted' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'grown' for plants.

× Well to be honest I'm a photographer and that's why I like to take pics of money and other things and flowers are the one of the which I take pic of that and but on not on the real life because I do not think that it is a good and I think it is a waste of time.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm a photographer and that's why I like to take pictures of money and other things. Flowers are one of the things I take pictures of, but not in real life because I do not think it is good and I think it is a waste of time.

'Pics' should be 'pictures' for formal speech. 'Are the one of the which I take pic of that' is incorrect; corrected to 'are one of the things I take pictures of'. 'On not on the real life' is incorrect; corrected to 'but not in real life'.

× But in some cases I take the pictures of.

✓ But in some cases, I take pictures of flowers.

The sentence is incomplete and missing the object after 'pictures of'. Adding 'flowers' completes the sentence and corrects preposition use.

× Yes, in my country the peoples are very peaceful and that's why they gifted flour as a gift.

✓ Yes, in my country the people are very peaceful and that's why they gift flowers as gifts.

'Peoples' is incorrect plural; 'people' is the correct plural noun. 'Gifted' should be 'gift' to match present tense. 'Flour' is incorrect; it should be 'flowers'.

× And I also saw a lot of people in my country who gifted bouquets of flower in the ceremony or any party and I'm also that type of person who gave the flower as a gift.

✓ And I have also seen a lot of people in my country who gift bouquets of flowers at ceremonies or parties, and I'm also the type of person who gives flowers as gifts.

'Saw' is past tense; 'have seen' is better for experience. 'Gifted' should be 'gift' for habitual action. 'Bouquets of flower' should be 'bouquets of flowers'. 'Gave' should be 'gives' for habitual present.