Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为简单，缺少连贯的连接词和具体细节。建议在回答中使用连接词如“because”或“especially”，并具体说明喜欢野花的原因。

예시: Yes, I really love flowers, especially wildflowers by the roadside because they look very natural and vibrant.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误（"Her heads"应为"Her house"），且表达不够连贯。建议纠正错误并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: My grandmother also loves flowers very much, and her house and balcony are covered with beautiful blooms.

제안: 回答较好，但可以通过使用连接词如“and”或“also”使句子更连贯，同时增加具体细节。

예시: Yes, there are many flowering trees in my neighborhood, and my neighbor's yard is also full of colorful flowers.

제안: 回答自然且内容具体，但可以增加连接词如“because”来解释原因，使表达更完整。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life because I find their deep, beautiful colors very captivating.

제안: 回答不完整且句子结构混乱，缺少结尾。建议完整表达观点，使用连接词并补充具体场合。

예시: Yes, it's very popular to send flowers in my country. For example, when a guest arrives from afar, people usually bring them a bouquet as a warm welcome.

× Her heads, her balcony was covered with flowers.

✓ Her head, her balcony was covered with flowers.

这里的“heads”应为单数“head”，因为人只有一个头。复数形式使用错误。

× Her heads, her balcony was covered with flowers.

✓ Her head and her balcony were covered with flowers.

原句结构混乱，缺少连接词，且主语复数时谓语动词应使用复数形式“were”。建议用“and”连接两个主语，谓语动词改为复数。

× Usually when a guest from afar arrives in your own city, many people will bring him a bunch of flowers and we will also send flowers when.

✓ Usually when a guest from afar arrives in your own city, many people will bring him a bunch of flowers and we will also send flowers.

句子末尾“when”多余，导致句子不完整，应删除。