Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like repeating 'I love flowers' and improve sentence structure for clarity. Also, separate ideas into distinct sentences and use linking words to connect them logically.

예시: Yes, I love flowers because their vibrant colors always brighten my mood. For example, my favorite flowers are roses and sunflowers, which I find both beautiful and uplifting.

제안: Your answer contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb tenses and plural forms. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I have a friend who also loves flowers. Whenever we meet after a long time, we greet each other and exchange flowers, which strengthens our emotional connection and makes us happy.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid informal language like 'Yeah' in formal tests. Also, complete your sentences and use linking words to connect ideas clearly.

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. I have a small garden where I grow various colorful flowers, which bring me happiness and joy because of their vibrant colors.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and contains incomplete sentences. Use varied vocabulary instead of repeating 'I do' and 'click pictures'. Also, complete your thoughts and use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life. For instance, when I visit a flower shop or see blooming flowers in a garden, I capture their beauty to keep those moments.

제안: Your answer has some awkward phrasing and minor grammatical errors. Use more natural expressions like 'special occasions' instead of 'special operations' and 'trend' instead of 'train'. Also, combine sentences for better flow.

예시: Yes, nowadays people usually send flowers to each other on special occasions such as festivals or birthdays. Although it is not very common yet, this trend is becoming more popular.

× I really love flowers because flowers have different types of colors and it helps me to become happy.

✓ I really love flowers because flowers have different types of colors and they help me to become happy.

The subject 'flowers' is plural, so the verb should agree in number. 'It helps' is singular and incorrect here; it should be 'they help' to match the plural subject.

× It shares my mood as well as my favorite flower is rose and sunflower.

✓ It reflects my mood, and my favorite flowers are rose and sunflower.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'as well as' to connect two independent clauses. Using 'and' is more appropriate here. Also, 'shares my mood' is unclear; 'reflects my mood' is better. Additionally, 'flower is rose and sunflower' mixes singular and plural; it should be 'flowers are rose and sunflower'.

× We both enjoy our company and when we meet after a long time, we greet each others and bought flowers for each other and those flowers emotionally connect us as well as it brings us happy.

✓ We both enjoy each other's company, and when we meet after a long time, we greet each other and buy flowers for each other. Those flowers emotionally connect us and bring us happiness.

'Each others' should be 'each other's' to show possession. 'Bought' is past tense but the context suggests habitual action, so 'buy' is correct. 'It brings us happy' is incorrect; 'bring us happiness' is the correct expression.

× Yeah, actually there's a lot of flowers in the place where I lived.

✓ Yeah, actually there are a lot of flowers in the place where I live.

'There is' is singular and incorrect for 'a lot of flowers' which is plural; it should be 'there are'. Also, 'where I lived' suggests past tense, but the question is about the current situation, so 'where I live' is appropriate.

× I have myself grown flowers.

✓ I have grown flowers myself.

'Myself' is a reflexive pronoun and should come after the verb phrase, not between 'have' and 'grown'.

× I have a small garden where I have planted so many varieties of colorful flower which brings happiness and joy.

✓ I have a small garden where I have planted many varieties of colorful flowers which bring happiness and joy.

'Varieties' is plural, so 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Also, 'brings' should be 'bring' to agree with plural 'flowers'.

× And those vibrant colors makes my.

✓ And those vibrant colors make me happy.

The sentence is incomplete and 'makes my' is incorrect. It should be 'make me happy' to complete the thought and agree in number with 'colors'.

× Whenever I go to flower shop I click some pictures.

✓ Whenever I go to the flower shop, I take some pictures.

'Flower shop' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'click some pictures' is informal; 'take some pictures' is more appropriate.

× When I see some flowers blooming on the garden, in the garden or anywhere, I click those pictures and capture the moment I keep it with.

✓ When I see some flowers blooming in the garden or anywhere, I take those pictures and capture the moment to keep with me.

'Blooming on the garden' is incorrect; it should be 'in the garden'. 'Click those pictures' should be 'take those pictures'. The phrase 'I keep it with' is incomplete and should be 'to keep with me'.

× Yes, in modern days people usually send flowers to each other mainly on the special operations like festivals or on birthdays.

✓ Yes, nowadays people usually send flowers to each other mainly on special occasions like festivals or birthdays.

'In modern days' is awkward; 'nowadays' is better. 'Special operations' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'special occasions'.

× They send flower as a gift.

✓ They send flowers as a gift.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to the general practice of sending multiple flowers as gifts.

× However, this is not so common. But this train is growing nowadays.

✓ However, this is not very common, but this trend is growing nowadays.

'Train' is incorrect; the intended word is 'trend'. Also, 'not so common' is better expressed as 'not very common'.