Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally good but can be improved by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "they lighten up my bright," you could say "they brighten up my day." Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, definitely. I adore flowers, especially sunflowers because of their bright colour and cheerful nature. In fact, I have my own garden where I grow a variety of flowers such as roses, lilies, and sunflowers, which brighten up my day.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, correct tense usage, for example, 'she mostly spends her time' instead of 'she mostly spent her time.'

예시: Yes, my mother is passionate about flowers, especially roses. She has a beautiful garden with a number of different varieties of roses, and she mostly spends her time taking care of them.

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and has grammatical mistakes. Avoid repeating words like 'Mother Mother.' Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, 'because both my mother and I are passionate about flowers.'

예시: Yes, at my house, I have a beautiful garden in the backyard which contains a variety of flowers because both my mother and I are passionate about them.

제안: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more formal linking words instead of 'cause.' Also, try to be more concise and clear.

예시: Yes, I like to take photographs of the flowers I grow in my backyard because they are bright in colour and cheerful. Taking pictures of them really lifts my mood and relaxes my mind.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid phrases like 'because this they really make you ecstatic.' Instead, say 'because they make people feel happy and cheerful.' Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, we often send bouquets to each other on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and graduations because flowers make people feel happy and cheerful.

× I adore flowers, especially sunflower because of their bright color and they are quite cheerful in nature.

✓ I adore flowers, especially sunflowers because of their bright color and they are quite cheerful in nature.

The word 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to agree with the plural pronoun 'their' and to correctly refer to the flowers in general.

× I grow a variety of flowers such as rose lilies, sunflowers and many more because they lighten up my bright.

✓ I grow a variety of flowers such as roses, lilies, sunflowers and many more because they lighten up my day.

The words 'rose' and 'lilies' are inconsistent; 'rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'lilies' and 'sunflowers'. Also, the phrase 'lighten up my bright' is incorrect; it should be 'lighten up my day' to make sense.

× She has a beautiful garden with number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spent her time in taking care of them.

✓ She has a beautiful garden with a number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spends her time taking care of them.

The phrase 'number of' requires the article 'a' before it. Also, 'spent' is past tense but the context suggests present habitual action, so 'spends' is correct. The phrase 'in taking care' should be 'taking care' without 'in'.

× Yes, in my house in the backyard I have a beautiful garden which contains a variety of flowers as me and my Mother Mother both are passionate about flowers.

✓ Yes, in my house in the backyard I have a beautiful garden which contains a variety of flowers as my mother and I both are passionate about flowers.

The phrase 'as me and my Mother Mother' is incorrect; it should be 'as my mother and I' for correct pronoun case and to remove the repeated word 'Mother'.

× She has a beautiful garden with number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spent her time in taking care of them.

✓ She has a beautiful garden with a number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spends her time taking care of them.

The preposition 'in' before 'taking care' is unnecessary and incorrect; 'taking care of them' is the correct phrase.

× She has a beautiful garden with number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spent her time in taking care of them.

✓ She has a beautiful garden with a number of different varieties of roses and she mostly spends her time taking care of them.

The verb 'spent' is past tense but the context indicates a habitual action, so the present tense 'spends' is appropriate.

× Yes, we do often send bouquets to each other on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries and graduation and many more because this they really make you ecstatic and cheerful.

✓ Yes, we often send bouquets to each other on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, graduations and many more because they really make you ecstatic and cheerful.

The word 'graduation' should be plural 'graduations' to match the plural list of occasions. Also, the phrase 'because this they' is incorrect; 'because they' is correct.

× Yes, we do often send bouquets to each other on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries and graduation and many more because this they really make you ecstatic and cheerful.

✓ Yes, we often send bouquets to each other on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, graduations and many more because they really make you ecstatic and cheerful.

The phrase 'because this they' is incorrect; the pronoun 'this' is unnecessary and should be removed for correct sentence structure.