Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, instead of saying "almost everyone love flowers in this world," say "I love flowers because they are beautiful and make me feel calm."

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they are very beautiful and colorful. They make me feel comfortable and calm, which is why I enjoy being around them.

제안: Improve your grammar and sentence structure to make your answer clearer. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about why your brother loves flowers.

예시: Yes, my younger brother loves flowers more than anyone else in our family because he enjoys their vibrant colors and the pleasant fragrance, which makes him feel calm and happy.

제안: Use correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structures. Add linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific details about the flower garden.

예시: Yes, there is a beautiful flower garden in front of my house. It is very colorful and fragrant, and I often spend time there because it helps me relax and focus on my thoughts.

제안: Make your answer more natural by using correct grammar and clearer expressions. Explain your feelings about flowers and photography with linking words.

예시: Not really, but sometimes I take photos of colorful and fragrant flowers because they boost my mood and help me feel calm and focused.

제안: Clarify your ideas and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid confusing phrases and explain clearly when people send flowers and why.

예시: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to others during special occasions, ceremonies, and celebrations as a way to express their good wishes and happiness.

× Yeah, of course, almost everyone love flowers in this world because they are very beautiful and look, really make me feel comfortable and make ourselves calm.

✓ Yeah, of course, almost everyone loves flowers in this world because they are very beautiful and look, really make me feel comfortable and make ourselves calm.

The subject 'everyone' is singular, so the verb should be 'loves' instead of 'love' to agree in number. In English, singular subjects require singular verbs.

× Yeah, and my younger brother loves flowers rather than ourselves because he like the colors of every aspect and the fragment of the smell that's make him mind very calm and joyful.

✓ Yeah, and my younger brother loves flowers rather than ourselves because he likes the colors of every aspect and the fragrance of the smell that makes his mind very calm and joyful.

The subject 'he' is singular, so verbs should be 'likes' and 'makes' to agree in number. Also, 'fragment' should be 'fragrance' to correctly describe the smell, and 'him mind' should be 'his mind' for correct pronoun use.

× Of course, in front of my house there was a flower garden made very colorful and fragrant everywhere.

✓ Of course, in front of my house there is a flower garden that is very colorful and fragrant everywhere.

The question asks about the present, so 'was' should be 'is' to indicate current existence. Also, 'made very colorful and fragrant everywhere' is awkward; better to say 'that is very colorful and fragrant everywhere'.

× I spend most of the lush time in this flower garden because it boost my mind and help to calm down and focus on other things.

✓ I spend most of the lush time in this flower garden because it boosts my mind and helps me to calm down and focus on other things.

The verbs 'boost' and 'help' need to agree with singular subject 'it', so they should be 'boosts' and 'helps'. Also, 'help to calm down' is better as 'helps me to calm down' for clarity.

× Not really actual, I feel very attractive on colorful.

✓ Not really, actually, I feel very attracted to colorful things.

'Attractive' is an adjective describing something that attracts, but here the speaker means to say they feel attracted, so 'attracted' (past participle) is correct. Also, 'on colorful' is incorrect preposition use; 'to colorful things' is better.

× It's very fragrant flowers.

✓ They are very fragrant flowers.

'It' is singular, but 'flowers' is plural, so pronoun should be 'they'. Also, 'It's' is contraction of 'It is', which does not agree with plural noun 'flowers'.

× I took photos in flowers that make my mind very calm and focused.

✓ I take photos of flowers that make my mind very calm and focused.

The question is about daily life, so present tense 'take' is appropriate. Also, 'photos in flowers' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'photos of flowers'.

× Yeah, of course, in my country regularly maintain their hunting and receiving purpose and it's very glad to send the flowers to others in their wish on the occasions and ceremony and functions.

✓ Yeah, of course, in my country people regularly maintain the habit of sending and receiving flowers, and they are very glad to send flowers to others on occasions, ceremonies, and functions.

The original sentence has unclear pronoun references and awkward phrasing. 'Their hunting and receiving purpose' is incorrect; it should be 'the habit of sending and receiving flowers'. Also, 'it's very glad' is incorrect; 'they are very glad' refers to people. Prepositions and plural forms are corrected for clarity.