Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。特に主語と動詞の一致に注意し、具体的な花の名前を正確に言いましょう。

예시: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses and cherry blossoms because they are beautiful and fragrant.

제안: 答えが質問に直接答えておらず、内容が不明瞭です。質問に対して明確に「はい」か「いいえ」で答え、その後に理由や具体例を述べましょう。

예시: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She often grows roses in our garden because she finds them very elegant.

제안: 文法と語彙の誤りがあり、文章が不自然です。場所や花の特徴を正確に説明し、文をつなげる接続詞を使いましょう。

예시: There are many cherry blossom trees in my country, and they are famous for their beautiful pink flowers that bloom in spring.

제안: 文法の誤りを直し、趣味についてもう少し詳しく説明すると良いでしょう。接続詞を使って文を滑らかに繋げてください。

예시: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because one of my hobbies is photography, and I enjoy using my old camera to capture their beauty.

제안: 内容は理解できますが、表現をより自然にし、文法を改善しましょう。例えば、特別な日を具体的に挙げて説明すると良いです。

예시: Yes, in Japan, people often send flowers to others on special occasions such as weddings and birthdays to celebrate and show their affection.

× Is I love flowers then, especially river and cheribs.

✓ I love flowers, especially roses and cherries.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'Is I love flowers then' is ungrammatical. The correct form is 'I love flowers'. Also, 'river and cheribs' seems to be a mishearing or misspelling; likely intended 'roses and cherries'. The sentence should be a simple statement expressing liking flowers, with correct nouns.

× One of my favorite flower is is really because my high school's logo was really and it was very cute.

✓ One of my favorite flowers is the cherry blossom because my high school's logo was a cherry blossom and it was very cute.

The phrase 'One of my favorite flower is' is incorrect because 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when referring to 'one of many'. Also, the sentence is unclear and incomplete; adding 'the cherry blossom' clarifies the subject. The verb 'is' is correct for singular subject 'one'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Here are a little cherry blossom trees in my country and cherry blossom is famous for its pink little flowers.

✓ There are a few cherry blossom trees in my country, and cherry blossoms are famous for their small pink flowers.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Here are a little cherry blossom trees'. The correct existential construction is 'There are' for plural 'trees'. Also, 'a little' is incorrect quantifier for countable plural nouns; 'a few' is appropriate. 'Cherry blossom' as a general noun should be plural 'cherry blossoms' when referring to the flowers collectively. Pronouns and adjectives are corrected accordingly.

× In one moment, the most popular.

✓ At one time, they were the most popular.

The original sentence fragment 'In one moment, the most popular.' is incomplete and unclear. It lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence with subject 'they' (referring to cherry blossoms) and verb 'were', making it grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Yeah, I often take photos of flowers because my one of my hobby is taking photos with using my old camera.

✓ Yeah, I often take photos of flowers because one of my hobbies is taking photos using my old camera.

The phrase 'my one of my hobby' is incorrect; it should be 'one of my hobbies'. Also, 'with using' is incorrect; 'using' alone suffices. The preposition 'with' is unnecessary here. The sentence is corrected for proper noun phrase and preposition usage.

× Yes, people in Japan often send flowers to others on the day when they get married and happy birthday.

✓ Yes, people in Japan often send flowers to others on their wedding day and on birthdays.

The phrase 'on the day when they get married and happy birthday' is awkward and incorrect. 'Get married' is better expressed as 'wedding day'. Also, 'happy birthday' is not a day; 'birthdays' is the correct noun. The preposition 'on' is used correctly before days. The sentence is corrected for clarity and proper noun usage.