Flowers— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时时态不一致，且表达略显重复。建议使用一致的时态，并避免重复表达相同意思。

예시: Yes, I love flowers because they symbolize romantic love, friendship, and many other wonderful things. Whenever I see flowers, I feel happy and satisfied.

제안: 句子结构不完整，语法错误较多，且信息表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致和冠词使用。

예시: Yes, one of my best friends, Jungle, is really into flowers. I still remember the first flower he gave me, along with stories and information about different kinds of flowers, even though I don't know much about them.

제안: 时态使用不当，句子结尾不完整，表达不够连贯。建议使用现在时态，完善句子结构，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. Whenever I leave the library, I see lots of potted flowers and plants, which lift my spirits. Moreover, colorful flowers help me enjoy life more fully.

제안: 语法错误较多，表达不清晰，且最后一句与主题无关。建议简化表达，注意语法，避免无关信息。

예시: Actually, I don't usually take photos of nature. I prefer to enjoy flowers with my eyes because I find it more memorable than looking at photos.

제안: 句子结构不完整，表达略显笨拙。建议使用完整句子，并适当丰富细节。

예시: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. Flowers are a sweet and beautiful gift that express good wishes and love, and I think everyone appreciates receiving them.

× Definitely, I love flowers because it represents romantic love, friendship or many wonderful things.

✓ Definitely, I love flowers because they represent romantic love, friendship or many wonderful things.

主语flowers是复数，谓语动词和代词也应使用复数形式，因此用they代替it。

× Whenever I saw flowers, I will feel happy and a strong sense of satisfaction.

✓ Whenever I see flowers, I feel happy and a strong sense of satisfaction.

句子描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时，不能用过去时saw和将来时will。

× Well, one of my best friend named Jungle who was totally into flowers and I still remember my first flower received from him and he also told me some stories and informations about different flowers even though I'm not good at it.

✓ Well, one of my best friends named Jungle who was totally into flowers and I still remember my first flower received from him and he also told me some stories and information about different flowers even though I'm not good at it.

best friend应为复数best friends，因为one of后面接复数名词。information是不可数名词，无复数形式，不能用informations。

× Definitely, whenever I went out of the library, I could see lots of potted flowers and plantations, which gave me a strong sense of satisfaction and uplift my spirits.

✓ Definitely, whenever I go out of the library, I can see lots of potted flowers and plantations, which give me a strong sense of satisfaction and uplift my spirits.

描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时go和can，且which指代复数名词，谓语动词用复数形式give。

× And I also think colorful flowers could make me enjoy the life and to really.

✓ And I also think colorful flowers could make me enjoy life really.

短语中不需要冠词the，且句尾的and to really结构不完整，应删去and to。

× Actually, I'm not someone who like take photos of nature.

✓ Actually, I'm not someone who likes to take photos of nature.

关系代词who指代单数someone，谓语动词应加s变为likes，动词后应加不定式to take。

× When it comes to taking photo, I will feel stressful because the conversation was at night.

✓ When it comes to taking photos, I feel stressed because the conversation was at night.

photo应为复数photos，形容词stressful用来形容事物，形容人应用形容词stressed。

× Overall is a sweet and beautiful gift and I guess everyone wants to receive.

✓ Overall, it is a sweet and beautiful gift and I guess everyone wants to receive it.

句子缺少主语，需加it；动词receive后应有宾语it。